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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 2000-10-24 01:49 PM


Wasup Passions, I've decide to have a little fun today and give y'll something different today than my usual serious and conscious style..by the way, I love science-fiction... Enjoy!

While I was star-gazing last night,
I saw an enormous UFO in the sky,
as it was shaped like a circle,
and moved as slow as a turtle.
It's engine made no sounds,
as it flew above my head,
and about 50 yards from me,
it landed on a mound,
as I looked on in total dread.
Then I ran behind a tree
and waited a few minutes,
to see if something,
would appear from within it.
A few minutes later,
a skinny, hairy creature stepped out,
and started looking all around
as his skin was grayish-brown,
and he had a tiny mouth,
and his small eyes, were shaped like almonds.
Suddenly as if he used ESP,
he suddenly spotted me,
as I tried to hide behind,
this big, oak tree.
He started toward me,
but I ran very fast
because, I didn't want to be,
his next alien abductee.
Soon, I was out of those isolated woods,
and back into cozy comforts, of my neighborhood.
Then I looked back,
to see if the alien,
traced my tracks
but luckily for me,
he wasn't behind me
as I reached home
and started ranting all about
but, I wouldn't tell anybody my story
because they would never believe me
in fact, they would be calling me crazy.
I ran into my room and
looked out the window
and to my surprise,
that damn UFO,
was up in the sky
and hovering over my house.
For ten minutes it stayed there
and suddenly, it sped away from my house,
like a cat chasing a little mouse.
Damn, I wished that I took a photograph,
of that darn alien spacecraft
because, it could have proved that,
aliens truly exist, through the black mist
and it could have proved that aliens exist,
like an Area 51 chemist.



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-24 05:14 PM


Nate~ Too funny..... I keep waiting for them to show up at my house........ -SEA
Kethry
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2 posted 2000-10-25 07:09 AM


Nate,*wink*
I wouldn't worry that they came to your door
and you won't be believed unless you're dirt poor
and drive a dodge, or a hoggish Harley
then all the newspapers would hang on your story
and believe it is true, not some form of lunacy
but where oh where would you find privacy
to pursue and study those little grey men
perhaps while your telling they'll come back again
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Charisma
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3 posted 2000-10-25 09:21 AM


oh my.......an UFO and an alien.
and this all that you have seen,
and you haven't take one photograph
from that alien spacecraft..
no prove of that precious time..
but hey what left is this incredible rhym.

and I love it.....

Charisma

Nate Dogg
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4 posted 2000-10-25 03:50 PM


Thank you, Charisma, Kethry, and Sea, for your wonderful and pleasant comments.

Nathan

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-10-26 01:34 AM


LMAO Nathan...how do you KNOW he didnt catch you?
Nate Dogg
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6 posted 2000-10-26 01:17 PM


He didn't catch me Paula because I'm in great conditions...I have no kind of implants in me at all...ha, ha....thanks for your comments Paula.

Nathan

Ron K. Fox
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7 posted 2000-10-26 01:25 PM


gee, I've had lost time, oh maybe thats just cause I'm getting absent-minded. Oh, well. great read. Ron
Denise
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8 posted 2000-10-26 09:29 PM


Very entertaining, Nate...but eerily familiar to a real experience that I had when I was about 17 or 18...it didn't land, though, and I didn't see any aliens, I was sure glad of that! I still think of it from time to time to this day. Great imagination you've displayed here!

Denise

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9 posted 2000-10-26 09:31 PM


I'll try again. My post to this didn't move it up...
Elizabeth
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10 posted 2000-10-26 11:10 PM


LOL, Nate! I believe you...'cause I was one of those aliens. He he he...good work.  

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



Nate Dogg
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11 posted 2000-10-27 10:47 AM


Thank you Denise for your wonderful comments
and thank you Liz, for your funny comments....thanks for those two nice posts.

Nathan

Jamie
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12 posted 2000-10-27 10:49 AM


well, that explains a lot........

fun read



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



BloomingRose
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13 posted 2000-10-27 07:40 PM


Well Nate, where WAS your camera? lol
Good write, who knows, maybe he will be back for you.
Deb

Nate Dogg
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14 posted 2000-10-28 10:30 AM


Thank you two poets for the nice comments.

Nathan

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