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Take a Breath |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breath tickle my insides tell me your hearts desire with every little tickle that you breathe grasp a hold to my hand let me take you there. breathe in breathe in slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breathe tickle my insides Feeling whole, but torn in to pieces once again. Blow me away Slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breathe tickle my insides Come to me with the ache in your eyes let me heal, let me feel you. Breathe me in, Breathe me in Slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breathe tickle my insides shadows crept across your face when you opened your eyes. sadness crossed your smile. Slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breathe tickle my insides way to soon, feel to fast fall away from all this feeling of no satisfaction hold on, hold on Slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breathe tickle my insides in an extreme nature you test the waters of the next lifeless soul take no prisoners Slowly whisper in my ear let the warm breathe tickle my insides breathe in, breathe in Blow me away |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The pleasure of whispers have never sounded so sweet. Wonderful write from you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This evokes a definite mood, and the feeling that things are perfect and beautiful, and then, maybe not. Great poem. Sandra |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sounds like the whisper of a sweet surrender. Nicely done. |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
thank you all for your replys they mean alot to me. Birdee |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
as they say----whispers get the attention Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
pssttt...you said it beautifully. Ron |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BirdeeB, Cuddles for you from me. Well written. Nice to see you in a better mood. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BB~ this felt dream like and soft.I like it.  -SEA |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Thank you all once again it means alot to me. BB |
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