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Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-24 12:31 PM

Moments Before

Together, minutes short
of our breath expiring --
what would you say to me.

Would there be regret,
would our last moments
find us looking back --
or taking the quiet journey,
searching each other's eyes.

Could you tell me that we've
lived a marvelous dream --
speaking the words, ''I love you.''
And knowing beyond ourselves --
there was no other love.

Should we be found alone
in those moments before...
There would be no regrets
of anything past.

While softly stroking your cheek
in the quiet that surrounds
us...

I would tell you again and again
with my eyes how much I have lived
and loved with you

With my lips,
I would give to you my last breath...
and in that moment...
our souls would rise together.

Earthly love
would be the backdrop
of our eternity.
Soul binding love...
ever after, we share.

Snow&Robert
10/23/00
~ek~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2000-10-24 12:42 PM

Beautifully done you two!

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-10-24 01:33 AM

Ooha! Wonderful.. I breathed this one in.

You've written how our love doesn't die but is taken to a greater level awaiting ..yes, yes, this is good. Marcy

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-10-24 06:06 AM

Such a beautiful expression of love..enjoyed Snow and Robert very much..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2000-10-24 06:35 AM

what a beautiful duet of love....
sharing it till eternity....
sweet everlasting promise.

Charisma

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

5 posted 2000-10-24 12:17 PM

Temptress, Marcy, Victoria, & Charisma

Thanks so much for your thoughtful responses,
we appreciate each one.

Snow&Robert

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2000-10-24 08:28 PM

Very beautiful poem, guys! I absolutely loved it!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

7 posted 2000-10-24 09:50 PM

This is breathtakingly beautiful. I hope to read more by the two of you in the future.

Take me as I am or watch me as I go

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

8 posted 2000-10-25 10:38 AM

Snowpants, and Tara, Thank you, we appreciate your warm responses.

Snow&Robert

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