Sailing Love -- Mark's challenge

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Open Poetry #10

Sailing Love -- Mark's challenge

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

0 posted 2000-09-25 02:59 PM

                               I
                             grew
                           up by the
                        blue sea with
                     the wind in my sail.
                My passion of the tranquil
           calm of the sea shall never fail.
       Daily I venture into this world without
   land. This peace and quiet all can understand.
                               I
long to share the sweet bliss of the steady drift with
  one who shares this love, too. So I built this little
    boat and with it I will sail my love over to you.

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Love is the law, love under will.

[This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-25-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-25 03:09 PM

Excellent!!!!! I do so love to sail and you have penned AND created a lovely vessel for just that. I commend you and thank you for doing so.

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

2 posted 2000-09-25 03:13 PM

Not only do I love your creativity on this I love the words that build this well thought out piece of poetry......Very sweet words.

Awsome Job!!!!

Jenn E

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2000-09-25 04:00 PM

Enjoyed this.

[This message has been edited by Melton L. Culberth (edited 09-25-2000).]

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

4 posted 2000-09-25 04:02 PM

Thank you all,
But you are too kind.

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