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Go to Hell !!!
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Go to Hell !!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Go To Hell! Wake up to reality And stop your dreaming We are over and finished I suggest you start believing I don’t want to be with you A new love is what I’ve found So stop trying to hurt me And quit hanging around You thought you could control me But I’ve got a newfound feeling So move out of my way I’m going dancing on the ceiling This is what I am trying to say Just in case you couldn’t tell I am tired of being polite So just…GO TO HELL! It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, that just about says it, doesn't it? i think whoever you intended this for should get this message loud and clear. feel better?  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This has a rhythm and beat like a rock song, punchy and to the point. Givin' 'em hell, yes she is! Corinne |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Damn girl.....I do believe that whoever this is for is half way there now. When you pack a punch you really pack it. Nothing hidden in this one. |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
You tell 'em!  Love is the law, love under will. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
OK! OK! He is pretty dim witted, if he don't take the HINT. Melton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH girl....Im gonna tell... such a potty mouth... have you been hanging around with that gemini shadows chick again.. she always was a bad influence on you  and Im just glad I can say.. you dont see me acting like this in the forums (hehe)  LOLwell who ever this is meant for should get the message... if not--tattoo it on their forehead LOL  later-evil-woman-gator..*winkie winkie* |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I can see it now... a whole new line of Hallmark breakup cards!!!! perfect! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
lol... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh how I like reading this Marina..sometimes it hard to move on but when your ready you don't want anyone getting in your way...you did another one similar to this a ways back...yes...after you tell someone nicely and they don't get the message I guess its time to bring out the big guns...James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marina~ Well, I don't think that message could be missed. That was very clear and to the point.(Just promise me this -- don't ever lst me get on the receiving side of one of those messages, ok???  )Love Ya~ Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey i love the poem keep it up and i hope u did give this to the person u wrote it for if i was ever gave a poem like that i'd stay clear away |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hey marina.... Seems I've read this once before, then again, maybe it was just my own thoughts. HeheWay to go girl.....tell 'em and tell 'em good! ~Sheri |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL! I think this should do nicely as a wake up call! Sometimes they just don't get it do they? My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 09-26-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When one still "PLAYS" with hearts after all has been said and done then HELL is exactly where "his" soul should reside. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-26-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
The big guns are out.......some people just can't see the early warning shots I guess. Strong stuff indeed Jon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you to everyone!!!! I feel much better now....no really I do!! LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marina I just had to respond. You expressed your feeling really well in this one. You told him exactly how you felt and if he was close enough, you'd probably spank him w/ a belt. You let him know that on the pass you did not want to dwell, so you told him exactly where to go, and that was directly to HELL. Do not pass GO Do not collect 200 dollars. Garfield |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Garfield, LOL......thank you very much!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Marina This was hillarious! You tell him how it is girlie...you have now given me the strength to tell someone in my life something along the same lines. thank you. great read~ amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
You go Girl!!! LOL Love the passion in this. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
There's something to be said for bluntness. Nothing like being hit with a club to clear out the cobwebs. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Amy, thank you. You go girl!!! LOL Martinque, thank you very much for your reply. Andrew,thank you. You know sometimes....... well you know! LOLMarina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Some people need to be instructed ... after explanations bounce Enjoyed |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, so this title got my attention..... but after a few reads.... whats your point exactly?... James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Rex, thank you very much. Well James, you know me.......always beating around the bush!! LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What Bush??????/ Where.....does it need trimming. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marina--You got the words alright...way to go!.... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marina, How in the world did I miss this???? I loooved it! Full of attitude and spunk  ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marina - this poem is worthy of response. great sentiments here - expressed very forcibly. |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Marina...couldn't have said it better myself. I can totally relate. Some people just don't get it. You try to tell them nicely as to not hurt them, but finally you just have to S P E L L it out for them. Great job. Love is only love, if you are loved in return!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marina~ THIS ROCKS!!! -SEA |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marina-I liked, have been there once or twice myself, you captured it. Janet Marie-Glad you specified Gemini Shadows!, have thought about it, but never said it in this way, nicely put! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
It seethes from the page! You tell em! Sometimes ya just gotta be blunt! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marina, blunt, brutal and totally awesome. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I am amazed at the how many of you are posting to this poem and I am really getting a kick at of all of your comments!!!! LOL Thanks to all of you again for letting me let off some steam!!! lol Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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