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Heading South
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Heading South |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Heading South He’s heading south, south on his horse he wends his way leaving north behind looking for his senorita who smiles at him her way he’s heading south, south to place his lips upon her mouth leaving north behind he’ll find his senorita no matter how the path may wind he heard her song wend the wind so fine and all she said that reached his ear is ‘we’ll be together in time’ he’s heading south, south he’ll not end this trip till he’s done leaving north behind looking for his senorita in whose eyes is his setting sun he’s heading south, south his steed so frantic, runs leaving north behind to find his senorita for he heard the owl’s spirit in kind he heard her song wend the wind so fine and all she said that reached his ear is ‘we’ll be together in time’ it’s been years since he felt like this he’s always looked for that one sweet kiss in all the others, their eyes held lies he’s waited his life for this one surprise he’s heading south, south he’ll not end this trip till he’s done looking for his senorita in whose eyes is his setting sun for he heard her song wend the wind so fine all she said that reached his ear is ‘we’ll be together in time’ and he’ll not look back at north again Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I can hear George Strait singing this.......and I LOVE George Strait.......this is really pretty.  -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
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Yes indeed, this is a song...I can hear it, with a little flamenco style guitar riff too...beautiful, sunshine! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful Sunshine. . . And SEA, I thought that this would be a better song for Alan Jackson myself. . . I can hear it now. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ya'll have my permission to send it to the country singer who'll take it on!!! SEA, serenity, Sven...great comments...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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