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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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Solitary soul in poetic deatH Understanding nothing save original siN Needing others in this pitiful lifE Denied such gifts.  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
This piece has a dynamic effect on me. I see the thoughts, and feel the feelings, but the words to describe the emotion instilled are out of reach. "I like it" seems far too trite. Very, very nice. @}~~~>~~~~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
An acrostic! Well done at that! But you are NOT shunned around here! You got all of us! Here's a HUG, I hope you it makes you feel a bit better  <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Just the idea that someone saw it was an acrostic is enough to make me happy. Of course it would have been YOU to notice wouldn't it? I guess I have been feeling a little bit "forgotten by the wayside" lately... ah well, as the proctologist said... this too shall pass... Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hey whew....sad to say but this hits....though in a bit of a different way, my life is such a mess that I am shunning contact (like there is so much to shun lol) and leaving pip today for a respite into myself, but had to come for lunch for a few last reads......glad this was one of them, and sending hugs ...this is well written because I know the feeling.........*nods her head* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in response to the acrostic, "no, you're not..." Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~JP,...your thoughts are pounding. I really like the way that you express yourself. Your words,...they get inside. Take care of yourself. *Peace. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Glad to see you around here again JP. It took me a minute to figure out is was an acrostic, I had my suspicions though ;p Good job. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
JP-- a sad acrostic at that...but i know the feeling you write of. and you are right, it shall pass. here's to sunny skies once more. take care. ~amy~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Great work here, and I haven't forgotten you. I hope you're well! |
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