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BSC

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New York, USA

0 posted 2000-10-23 11:54 AM

May I brush for you my love
as an artist with a pallette
whose colors of the universe
blend into a perfect shade of us;
May I sing for you my love
in hushed, whispered tones
that leave pools of together
forever floating through hearts;
May I dance for you my love
as mirrored glass reflects
the age old cliches
of just born emotion;
May I write for you my love
for an evermore of yesterday
as cobwebs spun of memories
cling
to the corners of tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 10-23-2000).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-10-23 12:04 PM

Bonnie, I'm seeing crystalline glints of a hopeless romantic...

isn't it fun?

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-10-23 12:58 PM

Bonnie....
This is so romantic and enticing! I'm sure the answer to all of your questions would have to be a definite....Yes!! He'd be crazy otherwise!!

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Follow your dream!

[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-23-2000).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-10-23 01:25 PM

love your words Bonnie..enjoyed very much

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2000-10-23 04:00 PM

what a romantic invitation...what else can he do than answer with yeah....superb

Charisma

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

5 posted 2000-10-23 06:06 PM

as one romantic to another - this is a wonderful expression - Loved every word!!!

StarGlow
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since 2000-10-23

Posts 40

6 posted 2000-10-23 06:19 PM

lovely usage of words, enjoyed

"May I write for you my love
for an evermore of yesterday
as cobwebs spun of memories
cling
to the corners of tomorrow."

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-10-23 10:40 PM

Bonnie*
This was so soft and elegant...very
beautiful writing~

LoriJaye
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since 2000-10-23

Posts 34
Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2000-10-23 10:47 PM

One word: Beautiful. *sigh*

=) LJ

"A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside."

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

9 posted 2000-10-23 11:35 PM

Dear Bonnie, as long as you are writing, I am reading. Your always extending to help and that's the beauty of Bonnie. So lovely.
Marcy

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

10 posted 2000-10-24 12:16 PM

'May I brush for you my love
as an artist with a pallette
whose colors of the universe
blend into a perfect shade of us;'

So beautifully romantic! Love it!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

11 posted 2000-10-24 01:08 AM

Beautiful!

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

12 posted 2000-10-24 02:14 AM

Well done, keep that romance flowing.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Acies

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Twilight Zone

13 posted 2000-10-25 08:22 PM

How could someone decline this type of an invitation? Thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

14 posted 2000-10-25 10:18 PM

My jaw is hanging. No words. yes, words.May I brush for you my love
as an artist with a pallette
whose colors of the universe
blend into a perfect shade of us;
May I sing for you my love
in hushed, whispered tones
that leave pools of together
forever floating through hearts;
May I dance for you my love
as mirrored glass reflects
the age old cliches
of just born emotion;
May I write for you my love
for an evermore of yesterday
as cobwebs spun of memories
cling
to the corners of tomorrow.

your words. beautiful. Ron

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