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Open Poetry #10

there is only this

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

0 posted 2000-10-23 11:28 AM

and days slide
from the calendar
time blowing them
as leaves turned
crimson
gold

and old photos
may yellow in that
wind

but the touch of
digitized souls
lingers in
magnetic memory
enduring more
than hard copies
or rose petals

and when the threshold of
passion
exceeds the limit
of responsibility
there is only this

kiss

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-10-23 11:31 AM

LR...I LIKE this one...so few words, speaking volumes of what is left behind on disk and in memory...

WOW!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2000-10-23 11:33 AM

You speak volumes here...memories...sometimes thats all we have

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

3 posted 2000-10-23 11:36 AM

nice. interesting mix of emotion and technology. I enjoyed.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2000-10-23 11:36 AM

suakm

*wink*

loved it!

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2000-10-23 11:39 AM

whoops! double post.. bad bad internet!! spank it very much! geez... lol

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 10-23-2000).]

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2000-10-23 12:05 PM

and when the threshold of
passion
exceeds the limit
of responsibility

possibly the best way I've seen it described..superb penning, rebel

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

7 posted 2000-10-23 02:14 PM

Hi LR,
Love your style and enjoyed this much.

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