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deb Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 44Reading, Pa., USA |
I saw you As angels ascended Your story covets nothing but love If angels could see They would rearange their wings And point downward to swoop you back to life |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Deb,...this little piece is a poetic prize. It speaks, and I've enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Take care of yourself now. *Peace. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is a truely wonderful piece from you and so much said in so few words. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's always wonderful to find gems like this. . . A piece of heaven. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh..i love this gemstone... what a lovely jewel of a poem ... sometimes less is more in this case its poetic perfection very cool poem... take care jm |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
deb- this is so beautiful  you've spoken such love in so very few words. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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