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Sven
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0 posted 2000-09-25 01:19 PM


I've spent a long time here on the ground
Searching for a love I thought would never be found
Until you came along and made my heart sing
Now that you're here, I'm soaring through the sky,
                                                   Flying without wings

You and your love have healed my heart
Given my so much, I don't know how to start
I want to tell you what your love brings
Tell the world from my place high above
                                                    Flying without wings

Soaring here, all I want to do is fly
The stars twinkle, the sun shines here in love's sky
Your love has brought me so many things
I never want to come down from here
                                                    Flying without wings

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-09-25 02:24 PM


What a lovely find during this hectic day...so glad I took a break...
juliet_2u
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2 posted 2000-09-25 02:27 PM


Oh Sven this is so wonderful. Flying without wings, what could be a more beautiful feeling than that? Thanks for sharing this my friend.
Juls


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3 posted 2000-09-25 07:56 PM


Sunshine, I'm glad that you took a break too!!  Like the rest of us, you probably work way too hard. . . thank you my friend. . .

Juls, it's really wonderful. . . you should try it. . . just put your arms out and believe. . . thank you also my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-09-25 08:10 PM


Sven
Surely sounds like someone in love, flying high
I guess we all know that feeling, which you describe so beautifully
Liz

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5 posted 2000-09-25 08:48 PM


Sven,

    ~sighs~ It is a wonderful feeling isn't it?   Well done!

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-09-25 09:55 PM


I'm soaring with ya! How uplifting and wonderful  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

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7 posted 2000-09-25 11:01 PM


Sven,
so good to be back and reading your work. as always, beautiful! i wish i could write like you my friend. simply beautiful work here!
take care,
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Irie
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8 posted 2000-09-26 01:31 AM


Ok, that's it mister.
You keep penning what I'm feeling and thinking!  
I couldn't have said it better my self.
Flying with out wings....what a high!  
I love this one Svenster....


~Sheri

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9 posted 2000-09-26 01:52 AM


Sven
when i saw the title flying without wings it automatically drew me in, that was fantastically writtien. I love soaring high without wings, Love what a wonderful feeling
BirdeeB

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10 posted 2000-09-26 07:44 PM


Liz, almost all of us know this feeling. . . thank you my friend. . .

rp25. . . yes, it is. . . tell me about it. . .

WhtDove, I thought that was you!     Thank you. . .

Amy, nice to have you back too. . . but, don't write like me. . . write like yourself. . .  

Irie, it's that psychic link that we have with each other isn't it?     Glad that I could help my friend. . .

BirdeeB, thank you and welcome my friend. . . you'll find that we do a lot a flying around here. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Wilfred Yeats
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11 posted 2000-09-26 11:38 PM


A love poem written from the heart - does fly - and needs no wings - Great poem Sven
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12 posted 2000-09-27 11:03 AM


This is beautiful!
Sven
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13 posted 2000-09-27 06:29 PM


Wilfred, thank you my friend. . . my arms were getting tired. . .  

Suthern. . . thank you very much!!    

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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14 posted 2000-10-04 09:37 AM


soaring without wings.....wow.
this poem remind me on so many good things....thank you for sharing it with us

Charisma

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