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I Close My Eyes...And Am Lost... |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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A tranquil bathing of your eyes falls delicately upon me filling my breath with drops of moonlight that cling within your vision. Smoky blue showers from a cashmere twilight cascade pulling the warmth of starlight through every shiver of my swooning skin. The tingle of warm lips descending toward my own catch me in the moment... I close my eyes...and am lost... knowing only your scent and your touch as they fill hollows deep within. Whispers from the sky cocoon in threads of light around our fusing bodies spinning us together as one. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Krista~ Made my mouth fall open.........SOOOOO lovingly spoken......stunning...A definate and loud *SIGH*  -SEA |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful work, Krista! Such very sweet writing, I especially loved that second verse, "every shiver of my swooning skin" is a great piece of imagery, I love it! Great poem, I love those kisses, they still fill me with wonder and melt my heart.. Abrahm Simons "I'm not sick, but I'm not well, and I'm so hot, cause I'm in Hell." - Harvey Danger |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Beautiful work as always, Alwye. Nice to know your splendid writing hasn't lost its sparkle in the spanse of time. I enjoyed much. -astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A tranquil bathing of your eyes falls delicately upon me filling my breath with drops of moonlight that cling within your vision. Smoky blue showers from a cashmere twilight cascade pulling the warmth of starlight through every shiver of my swooning skin. The tingle of warm lips descending toward my own catch me in the moment... I close my eyes...and am lost... knowing only your scent and your touch as they fill hollows deep within. Whispers from the sky cocoon in threads of light around our fusing bodies spinning us together as one. ================= YEP...EVERY LINE.....MY GOODNESS KRISTA .. this is stunning...made me catch my breath stunning imagery dressed in such passionate wonderful emotions sensual and sincere... that is one INSPIRING MUSE YA GOT THERE.. later-awe-me-again-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ The softness of this piece is just feathered illusion~ 'Smoky blue showers from a cashmere twilight cascade' Doesn't get much prettier than that ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Krista Lovely soft visions as I close my eyes...after I've read of course...tee hee  A tranquil bathing of your eyes falls delicately upon me filling my breath with drops of moonlight that cling within your vision. Smoky blue showers from a cashmere twilight cascade pulling the warmth of starlight through every shiver of my swooning skin. The tingle of warm lips descending toward my own catch me in the moment... I close my eyes...and am lost... knowing only your scent and your touch as they fill hollows deep within. Whispers from the sky cocoon in threads of light around our fusing bodies spinning us together as one. Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thanks for the URL Krissa. Beautiful poem. I'm sorry I almost missed this one! "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
As always Krista, your poetry is extremely beautiul. I enjoyed reading as I alwaysdo hon Thanks Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*......wonderful....and hearthbreathe taken. Charisma |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful and so romantic! One of your best my dear!  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so very much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a stunning display of sensuality and love...this is so feather soft that it floated across the page as if caught in the wind of your pen...breathtaking work Krista~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A tranquil bathing of your eyes falls delicately upon me filling my breath with drops of moonlight that cling within your vision.' Very sensual! I loved it! Great write! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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