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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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your smile sets my heart to singing yet i have never seen your face your strong hugs keep me safe and warm though i have yet to feel your embrace your kisses thrill me to the core yet your lips i endless seek your words gently caress my soul though i have yet to hear you speak how can it be...this love i've found- not the fantasy that it seems as i close my eyes and drift away to where you hold me in my dreams -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-22-2000).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sometimes the best things are what we dream of. That way we are never disappointed. This was very very good. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Vicky~ I like it !  I like it ! 'as i close my eyes and drift away to where you hold me in my dreams' YEAH !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in dreams we find that which makes us whole again. . . Wonderful Vicky. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky, Awesome write my friend!!! Hang on to those dreams.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
In your dreams I shall be In my dreams you are there In dreams we both shall see Dreams are real, this I swear Lovely verse my friend and since you either didn't see the last request or you are ignoring me (and it better be that you didn't see,LOL)... How about a duet of poetry together? Will ya please?????  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is a very beautiful and tender weave Vicky...I enjoyed the flow and the lovely thoughts that you put into this~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
inot2B- thanks so much for the kind words. glad you enjoyed. Marge, my friend- wow...such an enthusiastic reply. that means so much coming from you. i'm so happy you enjoyed this. aren't dreams WONDERFUL?! Sven- how right you are. thank you so much for your kind words. really glad you liked this. Lone Wolf- hanging on i am. thanks you for your sweet reply. glad you enjoyed this. Mark- such a whiney cowboy you are...lol. no, i'm not ignoring you...just a bit slow in responding. ...and i wouldlove to write a duet with you, my friend. thank you so much for the beautiful reply...as usual, you have me smiling a smile that barely fits on my face. hugs to you my sweet friend. Holly- thank you so much for your kind words. they really mean alot to me. so glad you enjoyed this. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah..dreams....  i feel this so much...tells the story of my life too these days.. wishing for you to find your dream..and run with it!..... hugs to you my friend... dg ps...what a great title!  my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a beautiful poem this is, and about one of my favorite subjects.....dreaming! Where would we be if we could not dream? Wonderful writing here, Vicky!  Follow your dream! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
dreams, what should we do without....a dreamy piece....loved it....and mmm....looking out for the duet.....with Mark.....or should that be a duet for two.... Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Dreams oh they are our companions of the night. We need to cherish the good ones, and vanish the bad ones. Loved it so much, well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful poem Vicky ... aaahhh, as many have said above, what would we do if we could not dream? This was a lovely, magical piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
vl - What a beautiful write! Those dreams, oh how they sometimes keep us going. Bonnie |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Really lovely dream... Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- aren't dreams wonderful...glad you can relate to this one. you take your dream and run with it too, my friend. (((((BIG HUGS)))))and...ummm...thanks...glad you like the title on this one...lol. Sunny- thank you so much, my friend. personally, i would be lost without the ability to dream..and believe in their ability to come true. so glad you enjoyed this. Charisma- yes...dreams are a wonderful thing. so glad you enjoyed. keep your eyes peeled...that duet will be coming. Daniel- thanks so much for your kind words. so glad you found this one enjoyable. never stop dreaming. Kit- so glad you found this 'magical'. i could not live if i could not dream. thank you so much for your kind words. Bonnie- oh yes...keep us going they do. so glad you enjoyed this. Deb- thanks so much for reading. glad you enjoyed. hugs to all, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'your smile sets my heart to singing yet i have never seen your face' Great lines, Vicky! What a wonderful dream! Loved the poem!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
snowpants- thank you so much for the kind response. really glad you enjoyed this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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