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Open Poetry #10

out of my distance

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-10-22 01:26 PM

sauntering along
the shores of my dream alone

last night just to fall in this depressing
hole a light shined out o’er the distance
as so just a wee bit I away turned my
head as it hit my wandering
eyes so as the sight
faded from a
blinding
state I
up from
all the hate
looked and you
were saying

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Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-22-2000).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-10-22 01:33 PM

Lucky~
Your thoughts saunter into the most intriguing places~
It's always a trip that is a pleasure to walk with you ...
Big smiles here
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

2 posted 2000-10-22 01:42 PM

Good morning Marge,

Your sleeping late these daz, drop me an E-mail and tell me of your latest...

love always, dale

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

3 posted 2000-10-22 03:11 PM

Lovely art as always; intriguing lines as only you can do - and as sometimes happens, I enjoy putting myself in the place of that light, whether you meant that or not - it's fun for me to think of cheering you.

Your surprising endings sometimes leave me with my mouth hanging open - what! You meant me to put in my own meaning, didn't you! You meant everyone to put in their own meaning. That is a cleverness I admire.

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

4 posted 2000-10-22 07:01 PM

RJ,
You've always engulfed my past... I think I can find a place for you....

baby bubba

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

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