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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-10-22 02:45 AM

The Reason I Was Born...

My soul, during it's creation
was kept from becoming whole

My fingers, while forming
were graced with a certain ...
touch

My lips, were given a softness
meant only for one

My eyes, sprinkled with emerald
stars...for all of your wishes

My tongue, given a map
of the paths it would trace

My hands, molded to form
within their twin

My heart, every other beat
kept for the eternal mate

My body, created only to
meld with true passion

And I...
I was born
to touch you.

S~
9-00/10-00

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 10-22-2000).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-10-22 03:13 AM

Allow me to pay you a high compliment---I wish I had written this!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-10-22 04:23 AM

"I was born to touch you." A desire that is fulfilled sometimes when we least expect it...James

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2000-10-22 04:45 AM

Very romantic, Snow! I love it!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-22 05:40 AM

Caught up in the rapture of you, once again.
Lovely as ever, Neve.

~enb~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-10-22 06:35 AM

Snow,
I haven't read your work before, (that I remember)but I'm sorry I've missed out if others are as good as this. It's brilliant in its simplicity. I loved it.
Be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-10-22 07:56 AM

This was lovely and the thought of that being the reason you were born, well spendid is putting it mildly. Anyway, welcome to Passions and I hope to see more of you. I loved you home page btw. Way cool and probably one of the most intricate ones I have been to.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

7 posted 2000-10-22 09:09 AM

Wonderful. I really enjoyed the read.
Looking forward to seeing more

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2000-10-22 09:24 AM

Snow~~~~~such another beautiful piece from your hand...and I love it~~~~
even as your homepage, made me think on that from Robert Joseph...am I right?
I will visit it again, that's a promise.

Charisma

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

9 posted 2000-10-22 05:30 PM

This is a lovely romantic poem Snow.

Jon

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

10 posted 2000-10-22 07:36 PM

You must truly love your soul-mate, as I do mine. I am inspired by the way you put this. To love, to comfort, to share - what could be more fulfilling on this earth?!

Poet's Sister
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 80
North Carolina

11 posted 2000-10-22 07:40 PM

Beautiful thought...wonderfully written.

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