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Open Poetry #10

Glacier Point

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-10-22 01:17 AM

It was a summer of my dreams
one I would always find pure
when I shared a piece of me
leaving the rest to this world.
High on a granite mountain
with the sun settling in for a rest
the colors of magnificance came
to my eyes my union blessed.
You can only hide you heart
for small moments in your life
yet here, as a hundred people hushed
you cannot hide for the beauty of the sight.
As the sun disappeard behind us
an eastern breeze came over to say
that all was well within our souls
fear nothing of how we will change.
My eyes wonderd from wall to wall
while the colors changed their hues
allowing my tears to fall
as I began to think of you.

[This message has been edited by Michael G (edited 10-22-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-10-22 06:54 AM

Michael,
this is very, very good,
You can only hide your heart for small moments of time.

Be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-10-22 10:47 AM

Thank you for sharing this with us.
The scenery and a small peek into
your heart.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-10-22 11:41 AM

MichaelG~
Enjoyed the view from Glacier Point -
could see the hope glowing -

'As the sun disappeard behind us
an eastern breeze came over to say
that all was well within our souls
fear nothing of how we will change.'

When the soul is well ... good things follow.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2000-10-22 02:24 PM

From the top of this mountain, I could see so many things. It is beautiful up here. A perfect place to share with someone special, if only in dreams.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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