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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-10-21 06:56 PM





Listening to our own song

Listening to the rain, that sing his own song,
while I  snuggle more up into the arms where I belong,
inhale your sweet fragrance and enjoy your softly kiss,
that touch my lips delightful overwhelmed through sweet bliss.



Listening to the heartbeat, that sing his own song,
embody the tense in this moment of fiery effusion,
emanate from our love that emancipate the promised way,
follow you in harmony, while we slowly drift away.



Listening to the love, that sing our own song,
accompany through mischievous hum of this love composition,
while temptation is the baton in this moment of confluence,
hue rhythm and emphasize rhyme inspire our lovedance.



Listening to the passions, that sing our own song,
while we consume our juicy fruit with intensive concentration,
tasting the delightful sweetness all covered with sweet love,
losing every sense, losing control, wild passions coming above.



Listening to the breathe, that sing our own song,
gloatingly united from thence reconnaissance along,
we step over the border embraced through heavenly light,
passions take over and illuminate our night.



Listening to the silence, that sing his own song,
while I rest into your arms, the place where I belong,
feeling such a cozy comfort, endeared by the love from you,
And I will tell you over and over, that I still love you too.

Charisma



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1 posted 2000-10-21 07:58 PM


How beautiful a tribute to a loved one.
Catalinamoon

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-10-21 08:18 PM


What a wonderful, passionate verse for someone dear to your heart Charisma ... you've captured such deep emotions within these lines. Lovely in sentiment and presentation!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-10-21 08:30 PM


Charisma~
Seems romance is the notion of the night here at Passions.

This is lovely and very well presented.
Enjoyed it so much.
~*Marge*~


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Tara Simms
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4 posted 2000-10-21 09:16 PM


Charisma, what a beautiful moment you've captured with your poetry.  Cherish these days always.

Take me as I am or watch me as I go

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-10-21 09:54 PM


Such a beautiful piece...the love you feel
was so tenderly penned here..and your
graphics were beautiful!

SEA
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Charisma~ this is so tender.......so beautiful...... -SEA
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7 posted 2000-10-21 10:09 PM


Charisma,
Your love shown so clear and deep in this beautiful poem. Your heart is blessed with wondrous deeds.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-10-22 07:42 AM


I can honestly say that I don't know that I have ever heard a more beautiful song of love than this one.  Absolutely beautiful.
Charisma
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9 posted 2000-10-22 09:13 AM


Catalinamoon : thank you for your kind words.

Kit: I appreciate your reply, and I am glad that you like my little poem. its nothing in compare with your writing, but yes it's penned from my heart, for my husband, who is very near to my heart.

Marge: with the rain outside, and we inside I guess that we can turn it on in a romantic time. I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Tara: I will cherish this days....thank you for your reply  

Butterflies: thank you for your lovely comment  

SEA: yes I feel it that way too, thank you hon  

Daniel: thank you for your lovely compliment, I appreciate it very much

Mark: I am glad that you like my song of love, but I am sure that you can capture the words better than I do. but I am always happy with your comment.  

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