Open Poetry #10 |
Listening to our own song |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Listening to our own song Listening to the rain, that sing his own song, Listening to the heartbeat, that sing his own song, Listening to the love, that sing our own song, Listening to the passions, that sing our own song, Listening to the breathe, that sing our own song, Listening to the silence, that sing his own song, Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How beautiful a tribute to a loved one. Catalinamoon |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful, passionate verse for someone dear to your heart Charisma ... you've captured such deep emotions within these lines. Lovely in sentiment and presentation! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Seems romance is the notion of the night here at Passions. This is lovely and very well presented. Enjoyed it so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Charisma, what a beautiful moment you've captured with your poetry. Cherish these days always. Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such a beautiful piece...the love you feel was so tenderly penned here..and your graphics were beautiful! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is so tender.......so beautiful...... -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, Your love shown so clear and deep in this beautiful poem. Your heart is blessed with wondrous deeds. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I can honestly say that I don't know that I have ever heard a more beautiful song of love than this one. Absolutely beautiful. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Catalinamoon : thank you for your kind words. Kit: I appreciate your reply, and I am glad that you like my little poem. its nothing in compare with your writing, but yes it's penned from my heart, for my husband, who is very near to my heart. Marge: with the rain outside, and we inside I guess that we can turn it on in a romantic time. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Tara: I will cherish this days....thank you for your reply Butterflies: thank you for your lovely comment SEA: yes I feel it that way too, thank you hon Daniel: thank you for your lovely compliment, I appreciate it very much Mark: I am glad that you like my song of love, but I am sure that you can capture the words better than I do. but I am always happy with your comment. |
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