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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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My wish--- she lies, uncovered, bare... a thought in tick-- pain of aware... a murmer--hummm... within a cage, the rage, THE RAGE--- to come of age. And oh, she tries, to gather dew, the mist of cries ungathered youth-- How could she, can she, forsake truth---the journey of the sage? Oh, to understand, again, the journey of the journey's end... To be the fool, the measured rule... I'll venture every avenue.. a kiss of verse, a poet's curse... I'll kiss you, and... kiss you again... Parchment is my page. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh, to understand, again, the journey of the journey's end... To be the fool, the measured rule... I'll venture every avenue.. a kiss of verse, a poet's curse... I'll kiss you, and... kiss you again... Parchment is my page. ======================== me thinks if we were to cut ya... ya would bleed poetry..  'tis no curse here... 'tis a gift one you keep reopening and sharing over and over .. me thanks you *kisskiss* *winkiewinkie* me loves ya too me |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done serenity, enjoy your work all the time. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey JM---was just feeling a bit wistful--imagine that--lol--thank you for being. Love ya lots. Daniel--I enjoy your work as well...love your name too...I always hum a little Elton John when I read your name...(Bernie Taupin is a master poet--doncha think?) Thank you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So kiss me!!! What the heck are ya waiting for? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'And oh, she tries, to gather dew, the mist of cries ungathered youth--' Just plainly and simply truth ... I love your writes. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~See Sista,...THIS is why I come to you. You breathe like this,.......*sigh*,...how??? Awesome stuff. Truly. *Peace you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Oh, to understand, again, the journey of the journey's end... To be the fool, the measured rule... I'll venture every avenue.." Excellent Serenity! I loved the smooth flow in this ... a wonderful journey into your thoughts, loved this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Serenity, wistful and winsome,beautifull write. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mark angelheart--SMOOCH!!! Marge---every reply from you? I cherish. Thanks much, lady. SF------I'm so glad you popped in! Stay PEACEful luv...I like ya much that way. Kit-----I thank you kindly, lady. Thanks so much for taking the "trek" thru my thoughts. Sort of like crossing "Styx" upon the backs of diving turtles...*winks* and *thanks* Kethry---thank you much, m'friend. I read every bit you post (I think, so don't quiz me...) I appreciate your replies, very much. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes "ungathered youth" oh, how well I have tried to hold onto it. Love it, absolutely loved it. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity---this is just so perfectly well done...just wow! |
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