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The Dream Died
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The Dream Died |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Crumpled up and tossed aside, feel like discarded trash. Love and passion burning hot, now nothing left but ash. My dream became my nightmare and still I don't know why. My hopes and dreams were broken in just a moments time. If truth be known, my dreaming has brought me to this hell. Cause no one dreams it with me, thus it is doomed to fail. So there it is, my ending, no happy ever after, just a fairy tale gone wrong, my love lies here in tatters.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i sent you an email..nicely written catalina moon.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww, Sandra,...what an expression here....let it flow...you write so real, so touching. *sigh*,...it's heavy...I feel. Please take care gurl. *Peace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"If truth be known, my dreaming has brought me to this hell. Cause no one dreams it with me, thus it is doomed to fail." No truer words have been spoken. We must find the right one who shares our dream because other wise they can temporarily shatter our dreams...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cat sometimes life destroys our dreams but never stop dreaming, powerful piece, I can feel your pain, huge hug. take care. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You must never stop dreaming as there is that dream out there that will be shared with someone of the same heart as you. I know you are hurting not but you will find that special someone some day. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Sometimes even when your heart is aching it shatters not alone For somewhere out there another feels they are also breaking on their own So if two hearts be shattered Scattered in the night They might just meet upon the shore of heartache tonight If one picks up a piece of yours found laying on heartbreak's shore And seeks you out to return it and softly knocks at your door Then you will know the piece you found laying among yours in the sand Belongs to that person's heart yet you held it lovingly in your hand As you each exchange the pieces you found that you've been holding You just may find the perfect fit of new love is unfolding *Hope you don't mind the inspirational thoughts your piece gave me. It just floated in on the tide.  I would wish for you a high tide to float another heart your way. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, Sandra, just wanted to let you know I stopped by. So sad, but nicely written, my friend! *HUGS* sp |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I just have to thank everyone again for the support through this trying time. And Marge, I love that poem, thanks for doing that, it gives me that little bit of hope. You are all great, I don't know if I could have made it this week without your help. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so eloquent, so well written, the emotions just flow naturally off the page... it sounds like you dream true dreams and my wish for you is that you will find a soul to match the wonderful one that is YOU!!! Peppermint Life is a Wheel |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This poem was very good. I felt your emotions as if it was coming from me. Writing has a way of clearing our mind from the cobwebs that disappointment bring. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
If truth be known, my dreaming has brought me to this hell. Cause no one dreams it with me, thus it is doomed to fail. cat, your dreams can also release you, as i've said before, Dreams come true, but first believe in yourself,tehn believe in your dreams, and then your dreams will believe in you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dreams can live. . . we can make them. . . heartfelt Cat. . . don't give up. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sandra ~~~ He is out there waiting.... You must close one door to open another....  Follow your dream! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Don't ever let your dream die Sandra, Sometimes in the hurting you will find a strength you thought you never had, I hope you find that. This poem was very good. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
((((Sandra)))) Great write! Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, keep on dreaming, *HuGS* Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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