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Torch Not My Heart
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Torch Not My Heart |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Torch Not My Heart~ Whispers... with a silver tounge you pierce my heart with words of love you touch silken phrases slide as honey on lips Words drip as raindrops on petals caress a candle burns a shared flame melting hearts as molten gold fused as one, two souls seethe no voice to take this in my hands Just torch not my heart BloomingRose |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
A wonderful expression of togetherness. Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice to see you listening to the music and hearing it. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whispers... with a silver tounge you pierce my heart with words of love you touch silken phrases slide as honey on lips ================ I guess the secret is knowing when the words are true or not. beautiful cryptic verse BR jm |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Excellent piece...well penned Take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Oh ! This is lovely. I was instantly reminded of the era of musical perfection of the 'torch singers' of their day. Those silken voices that sang out in the blues of the night could capture the 'flame in each and every note. Oh, now you've sent me on a search. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deserves to be in my library. Loved the message in it. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Daniel~ Thank you much.  Mark~ Thanks for the nice reply. JM~ True, words in a poem are sometimes from things we may hear from a song, or other things that inspire the imagination. They are fun just the same, wherever they come from. Thanks Tracie~ Thanks Marge~ You hit the nail on the head. This one was inspired by a song. I listen to music when I write so sometimes it happens like that. Thanks. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
BloomingRose- ah yes...another music lover. this is absolutely beautiful. i love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
You have managed to speak the whole tale in just a few short verses... great job  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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