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My names Matt, will you write a poem for me
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My names Matt, will you write a poem for me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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My name is Matt, write a poem for me Charge me ten cents and set up a table Please sign your name it’s worth lots you see Sign one for Suzy sign one for Mable You our fond idol you whom we worship We rave and we roar. Girls tear their shirts And each one desires to kiss your sweet lips And nag you to write of love till it hurts Then we all parted and went our own ways Some went to college and some went to jail You my good friend never cease to amaze You write poems still hearty and hale On the street corner dirty and dingy I found you with friends you always did like At your feet some relation of Benji Write me a poem and I’ll spare you an Ike Oh where did they say they found Mister Poe? Fallen in the street of old Baltimore “Congestion of brain” don’t think we’ll e’er know If that's the fine wine bleeding through pores My odoriferous colleague please rise! Stand up, brush off, kick the organ grinder Surely as back then when we would surmise You were born to make e’en rainbows kinder Who’s gotta dime For this friend of mine!!! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walty, hehe you amaze me  What are you going to come up with next? I can't wait to see Loved it Walty Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Walt... At your feet some relation of Benji HAHAH Sorry - that just gets me...that is cool. And this: Oh where did they say they found Mister Poe? Fallen in the street of old Baltimore “Congestion of brain” don’t think we’ll e’er know If that's the fine wine bleeding through pores Is rather profound-like... Me likes this one..me does... 'sK "He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walt, These days you can get a lot for ten cents. Very different, very vivid poetry. I like it. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx guys lots wavin at sev |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this one is much deeper than it appears on the surface, both of which are great...lots of great lines in here |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i found more depth in this one than expected also.. very interesting read!hugs, dg "Don't MAKE Me come down there." God |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks guys yuh i did lil research for this one yuh |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ you fascinate me.....I love the way you write. -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
U GOT ME  smilingU GOT ME  wonderingWhat you gonna write next PoetFriend Great poem WALT... Coco |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Walt, From deep within your "wayout" psyche you write poems that we all like(y). Perhaps the "masters" you have read ?, before you were dropped on your head? Great stuff ! Doc |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Walt- wow...yes...lots of depth to this one. great write...i like it lots.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yeah I like this one too.... Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You just never cease to amaze me |
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