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Please Come Out And They Did
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Please Come Out And They Did |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Please Come Out And They Did No stars remain this early morn, was looking towards their heavenly light, to wish upon one so bright. Was going to ask if this day be blessed, come what may, come what might. Obscured by this seasons plight, I keep searching for their powerful light. The moon just a sliver far to the west, the sun not yet risen but guaranteed to be oh so bright. I sit with anticipation hoping for a break in the storm’s wake, looking to the heavens for a little peace in my life for goodness sake. Patience please I tell myself, as I notice the eastern glow begin ever so softly, knowing upon its cresting I shall have to wait until the next days dawn. The wind now begins to blow, giving me a chance I know and sure enough in a seconds time the clouds do part and the stars do shine. I take sight of a mighty star just to the north, but knowing just how far my wish must travel before it reaches such a heavenly gift. Bowing my head to give thanks for listening, that mighty light gave a twinkle to let me know my wish was heard, So I said thank you with tender affection. Now I sit in much contentment to enjoy the remainder of the dawn, believing in my heart this days been blessed the sun did come and I do smile. BY, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well done, Cerenity! I'm glad you found peace. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Cerenity..... Sometimes it helps to look upon something that we know is a constant, never-changing force, like the sun and the stars. Kind of makes you feel more secure! Nice writing!!!  Follow your dream! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Elizabeth and Sunny Thank you for your kind replys to this poem, I went to look for the stars really early this morning and they were'nt there, I guess its that time of year, but I know their not going any were either, thanks again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Now I sit in much contentment to enjoy the remainder of the dawn, believing in my heart this days been blessed the sun did come and I do smile. Cerenity, beautifully written poem, reminds me of the full Monday last Saturday which was very special to me. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What sometimes we can't see we must trust to be there for us anyway. Most often we find they are hiding inside of us. Wonderful piece to read this morning and no there are no stars out now but I do know that they are waiting for tonight to wink at me again. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..all these great poems floating to the top. Cerenity, I love this! Waiting, patience, anticipating, amid storm searching for a light, disappointed-not giving up-returning tomorrow,with hope, then it apears!!..the break you were looking for.... the confirmation and peace. Sorry for the rambling but this is wonderful ! Marcy |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, Mark, Marcy, Thank you so much for your words of kindness. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ 'Til your verse I never had an inkling One star could do so darn much twinkling ! I just LOVED this write, sweet little poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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