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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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For my angel.... Opal Eyes In my dreams I see those opal eyes The sparkling hues of green and blue Deep reflections of a beautiful soul Much like the butterfly, fragile yet true And as I'm drawn to those alluring gems They show the beauty of a thousand starlit nights Shining brightly in twilight's clouded glow A wonder to behold, free soul in flight "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
In my dreams I see those opal eyes The sparkling hues of green and blue Deep reflections of a beautiful soul Much like the butterfly, fragile yet true And as I'm drawn to those alluring gems They show the beauty of a thousand starlit nights Shining brightly in twilight's clouded glow A wonder to behold, free soul in flight This is just soo beautiful EagleOne...lovely, tender writing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How did you know what colour my eyes are? This is just lovely EagleOne...the eyes can be the most alluring part of someone...falling into the depths of a person in their eyes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Deep reflections of a beautiful soul Much like the butterfly, fragile yet true *sigh* this is so beautiful..love this lines. no that's not true, I love the whole poem, cause its superb. thanks for sharing it. Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle* This is simply exquisite my friend, This delicate weave is yet more proof that you are the poet I've always told you that you are  ...so that means.....I told ya so  Beautiful writing~ Oh...and a little bird told me tomorrow is your b-day ....ooops did I say that out loud |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"They show the beauty of a thousand starlit nights Shining brightly in twilight's clouded glow " Lovely and picturesque EagleOne ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ This little piece just captures the glow of love so sweet. You romantic you ! I just love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful verse your angel...I know that she will love it and love you for it and all will be as it is meant to be. You can tell it is from the heart. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I hope you will show this to her..the part that will touch her is.."For my angel" very lovely Eagle One.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In my dreams I see those opal eyes The sparkling hues of green and blue Deep reflections of a beautiful soul Much like the butterfly, fragile yet true =============== Eagle.. this is so lovely... a beautiful gemstone of poetry so much said in 2 perfect jewels of verse wonderful writing..indeed later-your-bday-is-tomorrow-gator hehejm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This needs to be in my Library my friend!!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Tracie.....thankyou! Your comments are always appreciated. Paula.....Alluring and deep, yes they are that, there is much to be seen in her eyes. Charisma....I thankyou for reading, glad you like it. Butterflies......Thankyou so much for stopping by to add your comment. Perhaps one day you will actually convince me! Nah!, probably not. Btw, I will have to see what I can do about that little birdie! Kit...always wonderful to have you read my work, thanks for stopping by. Marge...sshhh! Don't tell anyone. It is pleasing to know you enjoyed this. Mark...well I;m starting to believe in fate and destiny, to a point . I believe that writing from the heart is the only way.Victoria...My Angel had already seen it, . Thanks for adding your comments.Janet...Your comments are far, far to kind I think. Thankyou! Btw, the bday would be now I guess, so where's the cake?  < !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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