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dgvarner
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0 posted 2000-09-25 03:36 AM



you tease me
to please me

you flirt
up my skirt

you make me giggle
and sometimes wiggle

with the wink of your eye
in a sideways sigh

you enter my dreams
i shiver to the seams

my soul on fire
oh take me higher!

*sigh*

you tease me
to
please
me

-dgvarner    

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theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper



[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-25-2000).]

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Parker
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1 posted 2000-09-25 08:41 AM


So your not talking about your teddy bear....  
This sounds like a job for a shameless flirt,
ah... that would be me. That second verse kind of thrilled me.... alot.  

Parker

Marsha
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2 posted 2000-09-25 08:46 AM


Dee this is so delightfully delicious, I love this.

You tease me
to please me

Oh how I love this! Take your medicine, if you will be so good you'll have to take the praise. So stand still while I play a rousing chorus of Congratulations, and take your bow.
                      

dgvarner
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3 posted 2000-09-25 09:26 AM


ah PARKER..theres that wink..   i live to thrill ya....  

BUBBLES..delightful and delicious is this one??  ya think??     thanks for your never ending applause!!  

hugs, dg

theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

Parker
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4 posted 2000-09-25 12:45 PM


Well then, thrill me baby...   I'm ready, bus pass in hand.  

Parker

dgvarner
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5 posted 2000-09-25 01:20 PM


hmmm..tell em to reserve that long back seat for us PARKER...thrills on the way..    

remind me not to leave my bus pass at home!!  


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-09-25 06:28 PM



dg-
   i love this...really cute...and with
   that short little reply, i think i'll
   leave you and parker alone.  it's getting
   a bit warm in here...lol     you two
   enjoy that bus ride.  

   love and hugs,
           -tricks


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-09-28 02:11 AM


aw tricks..leaving so soon?? dont go....you can fill the seat just in front of us..cause you know..when we come up for air, we'll need to ask someone, "are we there yet?"  LOL

glad you liked my funny little ditty  

hugs, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-09-28 02:20 AM


  
~dg~
Oh this is sooo cute
  

~Tracie~
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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 09-28-2000).]

Siofra
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9 posted 2000-09-28 03:28 AM


Lively and passionate..


I am many.

Kethry
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10 posted 2000-09-29 05:09 PM


dg
you are definitly "there." Teasing piece, very flirtatious, loved it.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-09-29 05:14 PM


Perfectly lovely DG! Your words teased and taunted as they wove these sweet sentiments ... nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

dgvarner
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12 posted 2000-09-30 01:25 PM


thanks guys!!  its so great getting all these wonderful responses from you!  

i'm glad you like this little belly laugh of a teaser!! lol

hugs, dg

theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

Parker
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13 posted 2000-10-02 05:47 AM


hey mister bus driver.... we don't need no stinking bus passes...  

Oh, and dg..... you'll know it when your there believe me.  

Parker

dgvarner
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14 posted 2000-10-03 12:05 PM


PARKER...you tease me..  

, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

Parker
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15 posted 2000-10-03 11:16 PM


  


... ah, are we there yet.




[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-03-2000).]

snowpants
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16 posted 2000-10-03 11:35 PM


Whew!  Who turned up the heat in here?  Very amusing replies, guys!  And, great poem, too!

sp  

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17 posted 2000-10-03 11:42 PM


*giggles*  So cute and so sweet!  

~Artistic~

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



dgvarner
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18 posted 2000-10-22 05:58 PM


snowpants and artistic...i must have missed your replies!!  

i'm so glad you enjoyed this    i had a lot of fun with it..  

hugs, dg


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen

Charisma
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19 posted 2000-10-22 06:16 PM


nice one.....

enjoyed reading it.

Charisma

dgvarner
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20 posted 2000-10-22 09:51 PM


charisma..glad to lend a  

hugs, dg

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