Open Poetry #10 |
you tease me... |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you tease me to please me you flirt up my skirt you make me giggle and sometimes wiggle with the wink of your eye in a sideways sigh you enter my dreams i shiver to the seams my soul on fire oh take me higher! *sigh* you tease me to please me -dgvarner theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
So your not talking about your teddy bear.... This sounds like a job for a shameless flirt, ah... that would be me. That second verse kind of thrilled me.... alot. Parker |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee this is so delightfully delicious, I love this. You tease me to please me Oh how I love this! Take your medicine, if you will be so good you'll have to take the praise. So stand still while I play a rousing chorus of Congratulations, and take your bow. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah PARKER..theres that wink.. i live to thrill ya.... BUBBLES..delightful and delicious is this one?? ya think?? thanks for your never ending applause!! hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well then, thrill me baby... I'm ready, bus pass in hand. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmmm..tell em to reserve that long back seat for us PARKER...thrills on the way.. remind me not to leave my bus pass at home!! theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i love this...really cute...and with that short little reply, i think i'll leave you and parker alone. it's getting a bit warm in here...lol you two enjoy that bus ride. love and hugs, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
aw tricks..leaving so soon?? dont go....you can fill the seat just in front of us..cause you know..when we come up for air, we'll need to ask someone, "are we there yet?" LOL glad you liked my funny little ditty hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~dg~ Oh this is sooo cute ~Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Lively and passionate.. I am many. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dg you are definitly "there." Teasing piece, very flirtatious, loved it. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Perfectly lovely DG! Your words teased and taunted as they wove these sweet sentiments ... nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks guys!! its so great getting all these wonderful responses from you! i'm glad you like this little belly laugh of a teaser!! lol hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
hey mister bus driver.... we don't need no stinking bus passes... Oh, and dg..... you'll know it when your there believe me. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER...you tease me.. , dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
... ah, are we there yet. [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Whew! Who turned up the heat in here? Very amusing replies, guys! And, great poem, too! sp |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
*giggles* So cute and so sweet! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
snowpants and artistic...i must have missed your replies!! i'm so glad you enjoyed this i had a lot of fun with it.. hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
nice one..... enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
charisma..glad to lend a hugs, dg |
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