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There I Go Again
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There I Go Again |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOPS...there I go again Thinking of you Just when I think I have you under control Locked out of sight The pain a lessening blow OOOPS...there I go again Thinking of you Hoping for a reprieve Wishing for a sign That you still care Even when I know it won't be OOOPS...there I go again Thinking of you And the pain of it Just takes my breath away Tell me what I did To deserve this OOOPS...there I go again Thinking of you Will there ever come a day When you arent here Filling my head Killing my heart OOOPS...there I go again Thinking Thinking of you |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i do so know the feeling. i kick myself when i think of that special someone that i REALLY don'twant to think about. well penned. very structured. i don't know if you meant it like this, but i read the chorus to the rhythm of "oops i did it again".  it just fits!I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?" |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, These are feelings I am so accustomed to. Take heart, I am here and if you want to talk, just email me. Loved the feeling of the poem.  Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Oops..There I go again.. I love that.. Its really something I can relate too.. Very well done.  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I like the ooop's ! Memories are for ooop'sing lightly over. A neat little write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
It can be very hard to remove that certain someone from everyday thought. The real challenge, I suppose is how we deal with the feeling, the memory, that seems to haunt us. Just remember... into every life, a little 'oops' must fall  Well said, Paula. A poem for reflection. Trev. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED THE READ!!!!!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ Oops...... I can relate....excellent way of capturing that fustrated feeling of being unable to stop that memory from coming back. -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is a really well written poem, sorry you're hurting, but you'll get there in the end. And this is such a well written piece. Take care Marsha  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ethan...its a hard thing NOT to do huh? Im sorry you have to feel this too Daniel JD...thank you and I really appreciate the offer..plan on taking you up on it Broken_Winged_Angel...well I think a lot of people relate to this...thank you Marge...lol some memories arent even worth the ooops...thanks Trev...you brought a smile to my face friend...thank you for that... Vandana...thanks Sea...well thats exactly how it feels...OOOPS Marsha...thank you I am glad you think so |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
great work i really like this one |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ah yes....That awful curse of visions and memories. You've expressed your self well Paula..... I love the way you've put this together. Well done! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Reminds me of Trisha Yearwoods' "Thinking About You"... great read, Paula .~ Beth |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oops I've done that to Why, even when our lives are content and we are happy we still look back and Oops there we go again thinking of them, I hate that. my ex from a long time ago who was abusive still has that Oopsing effect on me sometimes and I can't explain why..sorry enough rambling You put it quite well Paula ~HUGS~ Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
CrazyChick...thanks I am glad you liked it Irie...some memories are best left in the dark...but they do have a way of srufacing huh...thanks Elizabeth...what a nice compliment...thank you Tracie...ramble all you want I dont mind listening...we dont always seem to have a choice in the memories we keep...you would think we wouldnt want the hurtful ones but OOOPS there they are. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Paula, the way you delivered this piece is fresh, and creative...thoughts of past love can be haunting, your account of those reflections create a rewarding read. Robert Joseph |
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