Open Poetry #10 |
What Songs Do Angels Sing? |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What Songs Do Angels Sing What songs do angels sing As they fly aloft the sky What colours spring from unicorns As they breathe a misty sigh What marvels are revealed As beside your heart I lie What stars can dance above Like diamonds in the velvet night What dreams can summon love To bathe in beauteous light What magic is gifted me as your soul spins into sight What mysteries do rivers learn That they first tell to the sea What secrets do doves call To souls who seek to be free What delights my senses fill When first you softly kissed me What lives inside a heart That hears anothers beat What calls behind your eyes Causing passion flame to heat What joy astounds my soul To find I'm now complete Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, this is softly sensual...just as you know it is... and I like it very much... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ My, my ... magical muse ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Mythical magical memories mesmerizing Marsha's more multitalented muse 'mongst moody masses moving motionless making magical moments more monumental. Lovely write from you. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
"What Songs Do Angels Sing"? The same ones that Rainbows do..."I'll be loving you, always" Thanks for the smile.. HUGS |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, thank you, softly sensual, yes Kari, I think that's the best desciption. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading. Take care Marge, thank you kindly, I was going to wax lyrical Marge, but my mind must have meandered off. Mark my friend, how kind, what can I say, nothing apart from thank you, now there's a gift!! So see me dumb, now there's a change!! (It won't last long, so make good use of the silence) Take care Marsha |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha What more can I say. This one will go into my top 10 favourites. A great write, very well done.Sensational. "What lives inside a heart That hears anothers beat What calls behind your eyes Causing passion flame to heat What joy astounds my soul To find I'm now complete" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
This is one of my favorites, too.. Very lovely and beautiful.. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Eagle one, again I thank you, and I am truly amazed and surprised, and happy that you should honour me with saying you really like this. Take care Broken winged angel, I'm touched, and I thank you, I honestly didn't expect that this would get any replies. As for being one of your favourites, you honour me truly, and I thank you once again. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marsha~ Just adored the songs your angels sing wonderful, lovely writing Marsha Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Absolutely lovely! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, I'm astonished that this has got such a terific response. I actually wrote this last night while I was working, and I'm almost ashamed to admit it, but it only took about ten minutes. I feel rather a fraud for accepting praise for something, that just sort of appeared. So I thank you, and I'm pleased you like it. Take care Poet's Sister I thank you, and I'm deeply touched Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marsha- this is absolutely beautiful! i just love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you Vicky, I'm pleased it pleased you. Take care Marsha |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely indeed Marsha.. Enjoyed ~Victoria A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
It may have only taken you 10 min - but it will stay with me - this is truly a exceptionally great poem ~S~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria, Thank you, I'm truly mystified where this came from, probably as a gift from an angel maybe. I really appreciate you stopping and reading this and for your reply I deeply appreciate you taking the time to do so. Wilfred, I thank you, truly it's one of those times when you scribble away to fill in time. Between one crisis and another and then you look at what you've written and it was this. So I'm glad that wherever this came from it is liked. take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
another wonderful poem from your hand... its always a pleasure to read them... take care Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Charisma, I thank you, but as I said I take no credit for this at all, it just appeared. I made no real effort, and so I feel as if it's a gift from somewhere else. So wherever this came from and from whoever this came from I'm grateful. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
this magically trnsfers me to a dreamland. Ron |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ron, I thank you most sincerely, and I do appreciate you taking the time to read this, and also to reply. I'm glad it transported you, we could all do with a little transportation to magical lands once in a while. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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