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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 2000-10-17 07:40 PM


I sit, mezmorized, by the feeling entrapped
I wish, tranquilized, needing to be unwrapped

I want, greatly, to have my mind intertwined
with my heart, plainly, just to see what I'd find

A halt, suddenly, to all thoughts that blind me
and hurt, shutting me, from what's now outside me

Then fear, wickedly, keeping growth out of reach
hosts fright, sickening, only pain does this teach

Show me, tenderly, how to move this big cloud
for angels, mending me, dont like when I frown

They're working, Lovingly, to guide me to light
leading me, patiently, they work through the night

I wait, anxiously, trusting them from the start
to heal, painlessly, readying my new heart.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-17 09:04 PM


I really liked the feelings I got from reading this and I love the ending.   -SEA
Irie
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2 posted 2000-10-17 09:55 PM


Such bitter sweet words you've penned ThUnDeRkYsS.
Very well expressed and well written!  
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~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"




[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 10-17-2000).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-10-17 10:06 PM


I really like this one...you wove a wide
range of emotions into this piece and made
it work perfectly...great work~

ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 2000-10-17 11:49 PM


SEA ~ Thank you, a little different for me... glad you liked it.

Irie ~ Thank you for your kind words  

Butterflies_dont_cry ~ Thank you     Glad you enjoyed it.

[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 10-19-2000).]

ThUnDeRkYsS
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5 posted 2000-10-24 07:00 PM


This is the one, azure, I told you :P lol
Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 2000-10-24 07:48 PM


It's great the second time around too  
Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2000-10-24 09:49 PM


Hey there!!  I see you are having many emotoins my friend.  Wonderful writing here!!  Hope all is well with you.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

ThUnDeRkYsS
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8 posted 2000-10-25 06:40 PM


Butterflies ~ Thank you again  

Lone Wolf ~ Thanks babe... all is well    Just trying something new sort of... lol  Hopefully we'll talk again soon    HUgZ

CocoBaci
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9 posted 2000-10-26 01:16 AM


Thunder... an exceptional write I find this one to be and it's being threaded 2 my library!

Geeeeesh amazing expression!

Coco

ThUnDeRkYsS
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10 posted 2000-10-26 10:24 PM


Coco ~ Thank you so much   I'm glad you liked it {HugZ}
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