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Invisible healing |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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I sit, mezmorized, by the feeling entrapped I wish, tranquilized, needing to be unwrapped I want, greatly, to have my mind intertwined with my heart, plainly, just to see what I'd find A halt, suddenly, to all thoughts that blind me and hurt, shutting me, from what's now outside me Then fear, wickedly, keeping growth out of reach hosts fright, sickening, only pain does this teach Show me, tenderly, how to move this big cloud for angels, mending me, dont like when I frown They're working, Lovingly, to guide me to light leading me, patiently, they work through the night I wait, anxiously, trusting them from the start to heal, painlessly, readying my new heart. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really liked the feelings I got from reading this and I love the ending.  -SEA |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Such bitter sweet words you've penned ThUnDeRkYsS. Very well expressed and well written! < !signature-->~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I really like this one...you wove a wide range of emotions into this piece and made it work perfectly...great work~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
SEA ~ Thank you, a little different for me... glad you liked it. Irie ~ Thank you for your kind words  Butterflies_dont_cry ~ Thank you  Glad you enjoyed it.[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is the one, azure, I told you :P lol |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It's great the second time around too |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hey there!! I see you are having many emotoins my friend. Wonderful writing here!! Hope all is well with you. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Butterflies ~ Thank you again Lone Wolf ~ Thanks babe... all is well Just trying something new sort of... lol Hopefully we'll talk again soon HUgZ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thunder... an exceptional write I find this one to be and it's being threaded 2 my library! Geeeeesh amazing expression! Coco |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Coco ~ Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it {HugZ} |
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