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Poet's Sister
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 80
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-17 07:31 PM

Sparks

Attraction can happen in an instant.
Your eyes meet
And something passes between you -
A look, a spark, a promise
Of pleasures still to come.
But some things are learned with time -
Things like caring and trust.
They can't be rushed
But will grow slowly through sharing
Of secrets and sorrows
And dreams of tomorrow
And promises fulfilled.

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-10-17 10:09 PM

I love sparks when eyes meet
Sometimes they just become a
moment of fantasy though!!
But sparks like that are wonderful as well.

Welcome to Passions

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-10-17 10:10 PM

Hi, yes I can agree with your words here, I just hope it can happen to me again. Nice thoughts. And thank you for your reply to my story.
catalinamoon

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-10-17 10:44 PM

Very beautifully done!

Denise

Poet's Sister
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 80
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-18 12:29 PM

insect   Thanks for the welcome and for taking the time to read a poem form a humble beginner.

catalinamoon   Thanks and I'll keep watching for your work and praying for happier moments for you to write about.

Denise   Thanks for your nice comments and taking time to read my work.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2000-10-18 12:33 PM

PS~ Sparks like these are wonderful aren't they? It's sad when they are forgotten or put away as the relationship grows......wonderful poem.

-SEA

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-10-18 12:07 PM

And where would that fire be without sparks

What a wonderful introduction to passions this poem is. It's a pleasure to read your work amoung these pages...welcome

Poet's Sister
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 80
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-10-19 06:49 AM

Thanks, SEA. I hope to keep my spark burning. I've been married 8 years and it hasn't gone out yet!

Thanks for the welcome, Hoot. And thanks for the intro to this site!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2000-10-19 07:39 AM

Those first sparks are always the best aren't they. When all else in the world just sort of disappears and the heart begins to search for the perfect song. Wonderful write. A beginner you say???? Not likely

Poet's Sister
Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 80
North Carolina

9 posted 2000-10-20 07:53 AM

Mark, maybe it just runs in the family...I am the Poet's Sister!

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

10 posted 2000-10-21 08:17 PM

Its true the 'sparks' are great on that initial attraction, but if only they could stay as a relationship matures.

Thanks

for the poem Poet's Sister.

Jon

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