Open Poetry #10 |
Intimate in·an·i·mate.. |
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
nice pl ea s ant p e a c e fu l wa y of being re pla ced a n d theres cold betw een th er es wor lds b etween th e eyes of the intimate in·an·i·mate b eyond s eeing ther e is only beli eving so d ont be a-fraid - to be le f t this way - on y our last c l ear day in sp ec ial s u-bmi s s io n l ove - l e ss/restrained e mot ion r e mains wo rld's got a new mach ine r uns on t ears and wasted d reams you only thin k yo u know what you mean come with-in d i scover the be auty of b e ing dis t ant and bo t h ered by re a lity re sistent cowards(me) wa tch your hand turn into a fis t a lways knew life would end like t his.. no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a n d theres cold betw een th er es wor lds b etween th e eyes of the intimate in·an·i·mate b eyond s eeing ther e is only beli eving so d ont be a-fraid - to be le f t this way - on y our last c l ear day in sp ec ial s u-bmi s s io n l ove - l e ss/restrained e mot ion r e mains ======================= dis t ant and bo t h ered by re a lity re sistent cowards(me) wa tch your hand turn into a fis t a lways knew life would end like t his.. ======================= hey jac ... i see your trying some new formats and styles of poetry ... very cool...very deep thoughts and reflections ... and the impact of those last two s...damn but then impact always was your gift ... be it 4 lines or more ... like the play on words here ...as in the title... like your new signature too take care poet-man jm |
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