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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Put these feelings on a shelf Tuck them neatly with no self. Hide away the emotions of pain Not even mentioning your name. Block the tears trying to form not even one tear I mourn Hidden deep inside no meaning Yet I'm empty, no redeeming Haunting memories stir my rage still I'm locked inside this cage In my sleep, no dreams to comfort Only you I see My heart can not pass you by so I deeply take a sigh and continue in my thoughts without my heart, for that I gave to you from the very start. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes it does feel empty when you give your heart away to share and then one day find yourself without the presence of it anymore. So full of sadness, I send you hugs my friend and wish for the healing to be swift for you. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Rosebud, I am deeply touched by this poem, your hurt is so evident. I stretch my arms to hold you and comfort you, just let me know when you want me to ease the pressure. You have to unlock that cage, fast. "Haunting memories stir my rage still I'm locked inside this cage" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rosebud~ *sighs*...the pain you are feeling is clearly evident in this poem. this was powerful and intense and very sad. i am very sorry for the pain you are going through at this moment. i hope that in time you find the strength to claim your heart back and move on with your life. until that time hang onto faith and keep your head to the sky. take care. amy  |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
sometimes pain does hide deep within, and sometimes happiness shines throughout, I cannot really explain, but I appreciate that you can relate and thank you for caring, sometimes my poetry brings out more of me than I really know myself. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RB1229~ this is so very sad...I HAVE to cry and scream and rage and get my feelings out...I think I'd pop if I didn't  Still, I understood this very well. Great poem -SEA |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sea, I do all of that and more!! But sometimes the battle gets tough and then I concede to fight no more. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Rosebud makes me think about how easy it is for us to give our heart away...at least for me...and so hard to take it back... James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I think this is amazing it's so full of feelings, so full of pain. A very well written poem, Hugs to you and I hope that when this time is over, for it will be one day, that you can be whole again. Until then lean on us your friends, we're here for you, I promise. Take care Marsha |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Hi Rosebud, You reveal a lot in this poem of your heart, and our instinct to try and deny how we truely emotionally feel- 'Block the tears trying to form not even one tear I mourn' Yet, you have mourned, and I hope you find healing in those tears, and find someone who will treasure the heart you so freely give. Jon  |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Hi Rosebud, You reveal a lot in this poem of your heart, and our instinct to try and deny how we truely emotionally feel- 'Block the tears trying to form not even one tear I mourn' Yet, you have mourned, and I hope you find healing in those tears, and find someone who will treasure the heart you so freely give. Jon |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks Jmlee, we are alot alike, I to am one of those people that dive in so completely, sometimes I think I look for more than I should, and other times not enough, but My whole heart goes either way, Marsha thanks so much for the hug, sometimes my feelings are overbearing wish I could hide them away, but they tend to come out I appreciate your hug alot! Jon, I guess sometimes my mourning comes from not understanding and your right sometimes I mourn not wanting to but it still happens. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Written with the ink of your tears...this touched my heart, excellent writing~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
glad you liked it butterfly, the heart is definetely open even when we try it's no use. |
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