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A Poet's Dream |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Poet's Dream There was of late an interesting commentary "only poets read poetry" as if so elementary and this little tidbit filled within me glee to think a real poet would read our poetry for this, I know, would mean a poet's open heart with opened eyes to take in words that we impart a heaven-bound soul would feast thereupon and lips to mouth the words that we've all drawn feelings would raise, or lapse, or dwell on the thoughts that lay soft upon the pale or a wheel-chaired soul could take wing and fly and dreamers thus dream of the sweet by and by but beyond that, you must surely see it's not just for poets, this endless poetry it's for all who thus feel the draw to relay in words the lives they saw for where would our imagination be without the loving art of heart sung poetry Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'll echo that !!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sunshine~ forever lost that's where  ...beautiful poem you have here...wonderfully expressed and full of such in depth emotion. excellent!!take care. amy |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Hear! Hear! Beautiful -I'm in total agreement |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful verse my friend and where indeed would it be found if not the page on which we pen. You have stated it perfectly |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, Ditto Mark, and Aimster and Rex and Wil, they know good poetry they do. Kethry btw I'm ready to post about you, get ready to hear it. Cover your ears. DuuuuuucK! Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, this is another of your perfectly penned and beautiful poems. Whatever you write is always full of your soul, which just goes to show how much of and angel you are. Take care I did say I love it didn't I? Because it goes without saying that I do. Marsha  |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, This is just incredible writing. How gifted are all of you here at Passions. My warm congratulations. "for where would our imagination be without the loving art of heart sung poetry" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, happy, good thoughts for me to read today Thanks Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rex, that's a lovely canyon sound, thanks!... Aimster, glad you agree... Wilfred, thank you... Mark, "perfect" pleases, thanks... Kethry, I want to thank you again for such a charming tribute... Marsha, you're beginning to spoil me Daniel, WELCOME to Passions! Come, sit back, and enjoy your stay! Cat, if this contributed to a smile, then my day is going better as of reading your comment...thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What better way for a poet to get inspiration but from a piece about poets penned by one of the best poets there are. Adding to library....on the shelf label "From Quill to Masterpiece"  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Mark...now you've got me blushing again... "'tis less than a poet's pen have I, than the true speak of my heart..." although that is in "quotes", I have no idea if it was ever said...but something tells me it must have been... and I thank you for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This one liked me too, Denise...thanks for taking time to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ you know this is fantastic!! I really like this . -SEA |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..take your bow Sunshine.. to read a piece that captures my attention, taking my mind on a journey..brings me so much pleasure; why write when I like to travel! Love it. Marcy "feelings would raise, or lapse, or dwell on the thoughts that lay soft upon the pale or a wheel-chaired soul could take wing and fly and dreamers thus dream of the sweet by and by" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, thank you so much... Marty...so very glad you enjoyed this little journey... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, What a wonderful look at how other's perhaps view our work and the impact we could have on their lives. Very well written!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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