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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2000-10-16 09:36 PM


~Embrace The Sound~
  


In time with the music I tap the keys
each stroke a note to leave me peace
my own world of words and sounds

A dream like state of mind abounds
eye's closed, the words still come
inspired by the longing noise

Not watered down by human presense
angelic notes float in my head
I pause to stay...

My sanity in place
I sit on this proper stage
where peace inparts it's
swan like grace

Tune out the world
no other sound
just my music and me
tapping the keys



BR



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-10-16 10:35 PM


Whether the keyboard of the computer, or the black and white ivories and ebonies of my own piano, I do believe I can relate to this very feeling...

well done...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-16 11:02 PM


Sounds to me like you have found the place that you need to be.  With the outside problems not clouding your day.  I do hope that you are finding the peace that you need.  Beautiful write my friend.  Don't forget to step out into the sun once in awhile.
Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
3 posted 2000-10-16 11:17 PM


BloomingRose,
A well written verse. I agree with Mark's comments. It is time to relax

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-10-17 08:01 AM


One more round of song I believe.
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-10-17 08:49 AM


Sunshine,
I think I was doing a little of both last night... thanks for reading  

Mark,
It was a rather peaceful place to be, just my music and me. Today the sun is shining bright, think I will take your advice and step outside for a while!
Thanks...  

Daniel,
Thanks for stopping by to read. I think there is something about peacful music that sets the mood.

Mark,
Hello again! Thanks for that added touch of your presense.      

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