Open Poetry #10 |
Embrace The Sound |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~Embrace The Sound~ In time with the music I tap the keys each stroke a note to leave me peace my own world of words and sounds A dream like state of mind abounds eye's closed, the words still come inspired by the longing noise Not watered down by human presense angelic notes float in my head I pause to stay... My sanity in place I sit on this proper stage where peace inparts it's swan like grace Tune out the world no other sound just my music and me tapping the keys BR |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whether the keyboard of the computer, or the black and white ivories and ebonies of my own piano, I do believe I can relate to this very feeling... well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds to me like you have found the place that you need to be. With the outside problems not clouding your day. I do hope that you are finding the peace that you need. Beautiful write my friend. Don't forget to step out into the sun once in awhile. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BloomingRose, A well written verse. I agree with Mark's comments. It is time to relax Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
One more round of song I believe. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine, I think I was doing a little of both last night... thanks for reading Mark, It was a rather peaceful place to be, just my music and me. Today the sun is shining bright, think I will take your advice and step outside for a while! Thanks... Daniel, Thanks for stopping by to read. I think there is something about peacful music that sets the mood. Mark, Hello again! Thanks for that added touch of your presense. |
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