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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Heaven unfolds before my eyes under cover of the night As she lays there exposed to my soul her body motionless, though not for long Are you looking for love? Do you see yourself in my heart? She smiles at me as her eyes open wide to brighten my day into the night Kisses that carres me as she brings me inside To hold me close to her heart and what she means to me. Dreams of her laying on the bed while the candles fill the air Send me soaring in the wind that brings me back to her As her silence beckons me back to her open arms. Are you looking for love? Do you notice whats become of my heart Are you looking for love? can't you see what you have done to my heart If your looking at my soul then you have found what you needed in your heart. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"If you're looking at my soul then you have found what you needed in your heart" Michael this last verse simply is divine...actually the entire poem is a splendid read!!  Coco |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Heaven unfolds before my eyes under cover of the night As she lays there exposed to my soul her body motionless, though not for long Are you looking for love? Do you see yourself in my heart? She smiles at me as her eyes open wide to brighten my day into the night Kisses that carres me as she brings me inside To hold me close to her heart and what she means to me. ====================== Do you notice whats become of my heart Are you looking for love? can't you see what you have done to my heart If your looking at my soul then you have found what you needed in your heart. ===================== ....what we ALL seek ... what we breathe and exsist for live and die for ... man do i love this one .. but then you knew i would very very nice Michael ...VERY me |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
As her silence beckons me back to her open arms. Are you looking for love? Do you notice whats become of my heart Are you looking for love? can't you see what you have done to my heart If your looking at my soul then you have found what you needed in your heart. Michael, I stand in awe of the last few lines. Your words are like fuel to a fire that ignite my heart. Absolutely beautiful and spellbinding writing, that is kissed with the softness of a feather pen...... Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
This is superb!!! Nothing feels better then love. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is an exceptional poem. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Michael-This is beautiful, seeing the soul through the heart. I liked very much. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beatiful and full of love. Spread this around to the rest of the men on the planet, please??? catalinamoon |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! This is fabulous. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michael- this is just beautiful. the last line says it all. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This is very good. It would seem that your fantasies have become reality. A wonderful poem and a lucky lady. I envy her. passion is life. . . |
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