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Wrapped in Rhapsody.................music challenge
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Wrapped in Rhapsody.................music challenge |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Wrapped in Rhapsody Twilight beckons, stage is set Whispers of music by night Silence broken by the perfect duet Start intro, let hearts takes flight Two in romantic radiant rhythm The Ballard, a most beautiful song Played in double time till bodies numb Blissful embrace could never too long Hold fast till final Fermata Last echo of the piano’s key Moonlight beams, of our private Sonata Wrapped in tranquility’s rhapsody It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marina, this is great I luv how u presented it from beginning curtain to final call!!!  Coco |
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Jhonbus Junior Member
since 2000-10-12
Posts 25Sheffield UK |
Lovely! and a very clever title too http://www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alright this would be two lovers sharing Piano Sonata No. 14...in the Moonlight...in romantic bliss...or my name isn't James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Marina. . .what's passion without music and moonbeams? If only the melodies wouldn't stop. . . Excellent my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Two in romantic radiant rhythm The Ballard, a most beautiful song Played in double time till bodies numb Blissful embrace could never too long ============ OH BABY...ring my bell.. toot my horn  girl this is way cool... very creative take Marina and oh so sweet with it sensual harmonies... very clever... you muse is melodic and way cool ONCORE later-sonnata-gator me |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Music to my ears! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Coco, thank you very much. I always appreciate your comments! Jhonbus,thank you and WELCOME to Passions. Hope you stay awhile!! James who???..  Thank you , my friend! Jan...wanna be in my band?? And how did you know my muse had so much rhythym??? Martinque, thank you as always. It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, this is very nice. Potrays a wonderful dreamy moonlight touch. James |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marina, Last echo of the piano keys... I really love this, I can hear the resounding sound now! Great write. deb |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, thank you. There is nothing better then a soft moonlit touch. Deb, thank you so very much. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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