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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Woken up to that harsh reality the thought to a crucified life of a non exsistent life-style a non exsistent harted towards all who have lived all who have loved Woken up to that pitiful desire to kill..... each one passing by for being all the sane To afflict harm on those whom loved to love me Excruciating Hell.. A Plague of friends no one there they turned away.. cautious to hand whats left of the heart Shattered into a million pieces Woken up to that Silencing noise of Moiety--created equal, society thinks... Tranquil, no disturbances of those eyes that are ment to see all that is one. I ronic, it is, those who dis-liked you most are those who turn to you for only an agitated minute.. Woken up to that Laughter that fills these lungs of satire Serene and troubled I am Tormented at those who know me best |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BirdeeB, Take heart, even though life is full of ups and downs, there are many people who will listen and lend a helping hand. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Birdee, a great grasp of subject. Also, I don't mean this to sound cheesey, but I think you might like a few tracks on Natalie Merchant's Ophelia CD: Break Your Heart, and Life is Sweet. They are an almost perfect contrast to this poem, and delve out fantastic melodies. You might want to investigate them... ~ Beth |
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