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Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-10-15 11:55 AM

~We Danced~

a familiar song in ear did ring
but could not find the heart to sing
you held me in your arms so tight
reminding me of what was right

your smell
aphrodisiac
your touch
melting me away

i feel your heartbeat
and everything fades
my head on your shoulder
tears fall like rain

i'll turn away
to hide my pain

i'll never forget this night we danced
and brought back our dead romance

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2000-10-15 12:02 PM

Your words are full emotion.
Don't let it ruin you life
find another song and partner.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2000-10-15 12:27 PM

I second what inot2B I know heart break is hard but don't let it rule yor life. Take care, thanks for sharing this well penned poem.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-10-15 02:32 PM

I could have missed the pain,
But I'd of had to miss
The Dance. . .

The music never stops Nikolette. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2000-10-15 03:50 PM

Nik~

let the music continue...

this is beautiful and full of much obvious love. you write with a style that is unique and graceful. take care.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-10-15 04:22 PM

Nik,
keep on dancing. Good poem. It for some reason remind's me of the song "smile though your heart is breaking."

Be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2000-10-16 01:19 AM

Nikolette,
The Last Waltz, a painful one I see. I offer you my shoulders to rest your sadness, stay as long as you want. I could dance with you for a million of years to see you happy once more.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

7 posted 2000-10-16 01:28 AM

i love him so much...i'm just glad i had balls enough to ask him to dance...

Nikolette

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-10-16 02:15 AM

Nice writing Nicolette...James

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

9 posted 2000-10-16 03:38 AM

your smell
aphrodisiac

... nice.

~ Beth

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

10 posted 2000-10-16 02:20 PM

thank you all for your replies..i can read this and i keep playing the image over in my head...it hurts...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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