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seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2000-10-15 01:39 AM

Crying Crimson Tears

A serene soul.
Untouched by fear.
Unknowing of pain.
Unscathed by hurtful words.

Is what I see.
In a dream.
Cloaked
in heavy clouds
laden with blood tears.

Crimson raindrops.

An imperfect being.
Flawed in thought.
Lacking of grace.
Head in the clouds.

Is what I am.

Yearning to be
that serene soul.
Aching
to be ignorant
of the truth.

Crying crimson tears.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2000-10-15 02:37 AM

Very heartfelt piece

A serene soul.
Untouched by fear.
Unknowing of pain.
Unscathed by hurtful words.

Is what I see.
In a dream.
Cloaked
in heavy clouds
laden with blood tears.

Crimson raindrops.

An imperfect being.
Flawed in thought.
Lacking of grace.
Head in the clouds.

Is what I am.

Yearning to be
that serene soul.
Aching
to be ignorant
of the truth.

Crying crimson tears.

although this is sad it is very well written and I enjoyed reading it.
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-10-15 09:53 AM

Lacking of grace.
Head in the clouds.

Is what I am.

Yearning to be
that serene soul.
Aching
to be ignorant
of the truth.

Crying crimson tears.

===================
achingly beautiful seraphin...
i relate to these emotions well ...
you've expressed them in a emotive
unique way...
love the phrase and title of crimson tears
nice to see you posting again
take care
jm

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-10-15 10:27 AM

Ser~
this is expressingly beautiful.
yet full of a sadness too. this is the
1st piece (I think) that I've read by you. I look forward to reading much more. you write with a wonderful style. oh the title was very nice as well. it's what caught my eye

take care.

amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-10-15 11:02 AM

~~~ seraphin ~~~
Oh, how I have felt this one...you did a wonderful write here, and I love the way you made me feel the words you wrote!!

Follow your dream!

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

5 posted 2000-10-15 12:20 PM

Tracie, and Amy~ Thank you for taking the time to read my words.
Sunny and JM~ There is a sadness in the sense that I believe you DO understand the emotions. For that, I am sorry. 'Tis not a place I would have anyone visit in fact. Rather merely to attempt to make them see via words. Take care, all. @}~~>~~~~ Sandi

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-10-15 02:36 PM

the tears of the heart
crying crimson red
bleed from our eyes

seraphin. . . this is heartaching. . . sad, but beautiful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

7 posted 2000-10-15 10:26 PM

Thank you, Sven. Your words always mean so much to me. But, you already know that. I've missed being around. Very glad to be back.

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