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| Open Poetry #10 |
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Crying Crimson Tears |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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Crying Crimson Tears A serene soul. Untouched by fear. Unknowing of pain. Unscathed by hurtful words. Is what I see. In a dream. Cloaked in heavy clouds laden with blood tears. Crimson raindrops. An imperfect being. Flawed in thought. Lacking of grace. Head in the clouds. Is what I am. Yearning to be that serene soul. Aching to be ignorant of the truth. Crying crimson tears. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Very heartfelt piece A serene soul. Untouched by fear. Unknowing of pain. Unscathed by hurtful words. Is what I see. In a dream. Cloaked in heavy clouds laden with blood tears. Crimson raindrops. An imperfect being. Flawed in thought. Lacking of grace. Head in the clouds. Is what I am. Yearning to be that serene soul. Aching to be ignorant of the truth. Crying crimson tears. although this is sad it is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lacking of grace. Head in the clouds. Is what I am. Yearning to be that serene soul. Aching to be ignorant of the truth. Crying crimson tears. =================== achingly beautiful seraphin... i relate to these emotions well ... you've expressed them in a emotive unique way... love the phrase and title of crimson tears nice to see you posting again take care jm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ser~ this is expressingly beautiful. yet full of a sadness too. this is the 1st piece (I think) that I've read by you. I look forward to reading much more. you write with a wonderful style. oh the title was very nice as well. it's what caught my eye  take care.  amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ seraphin ~~~ Oh, how I have felt this one...you did a wonderful write here, and I love the way you made me feel the words you wrote!!  Follow your dream! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Tracie, and Amy~ Thank you for taking the time to read my words. Sunny and JM~ There is a sadness in the sense that I believe you DO understand the emotions. For that, I am sorry. 'Tis not a place I would have anyone visit in fact. Rather merely to attempt to make them see via words. Take care, all. @}~~>~~~~ Sandi |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the tears of the heart crying crimson red bleed from our eyes seraphin. . . this is heartaching. . . sad, but beautiful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you, Sven. Your words always mean so much to me. But, you already know that. I've missed being around. Very glad to be back. |
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