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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-13 12:36 PM

Love, the joy of the rain
falling on the window seal
as your arms hold me tightly
clinging to you wanting you more
than anything I've ever wanted in
my life.
Love,singing of your eyes
that seem to dazzle me and I'm lost
in complete surrender no matter the circumstance
Storms all around but here I am calm within
your arms that hold me
and tell me that I am loved.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2000-10-13 01:27 PM

You're lucky. I like this.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-10-13 02:20 PM

thanks reject, I'm just lucky because if for only a second you feel love it begins to grow just as a beautiful flower, in that I am lucky.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-10-13 07:35 PM

What an honest, refreshing read.

Kathleen

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-10-13 08:47 PM

clinging to you wanting you more
than anything I've ever wanted in
my life.
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that one line says it all...
and i know exactly what your saying here
and you have captured that moment of completion and contentment perfectly ...
wonderful sincere, sensual, tender words here
RB...
made for a sweet read ...
well done..
take care
jm

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-10-14 12:29 PM

thank you Irish Rose and Janet Marie, I'm glad you liked it, Sometimes it's so hard to express how love feels I'm glad you could feel the tenderness I was trying to convey in this.

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2000-10-14 02:09 AM

Heart and soul in this poem.
Cheer up Rosebud.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

7 posted 2000-10-14 02:26 AM

This is so simple, honest, and enchanting. Rosebud, you have said more in these few lines than I have grasped at with hundreds. Thank you for this read. It truly moved me.

~ Beth

P.S.
I love this line:
Love, singing of your eyes

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-10-15 11:23 PM

thanks Daniel, and Elizabeth, Love moves all obstacles and even the worse storm seems only a drizzle when your held within your lovers arms to reassure you.

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