Open Poetry #10 |
Sorrow |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
To all me friends who weren't aloof I'm coming back and here's the proof. Sorrow rains Across the landscape of happiness Damping down joy and covering the sunshine in gloom Sorrow reigns In the hearts of those cursed And cuts like a knife as no power on earth can save them Sorrow reins Where faith is abundant the soul looks up and prayers of hope are heard ...and answered. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sorrow would be if we weren't able to read your fine poetry. I'm glad you are back. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Better keep your little bootie right here where you belong ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ditto. Welcome back! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
rains- reigns - reins - you are good - very cool - like this a lot |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's a better place with you, Kethry |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Keth... take it from someone whos tried to "leave" for weeks... this place is under our skin... its HOME ... creative and cool poem... great write take care jm |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Parting is such sweet?.....Where the hell didja think you were going anyhow?....I'll stalk you yanno......just ask Balladeer...he dreams, eats, sleeps, and talks Toerag all the time?.....(Like most of the wimmen that have met me)....LOL...and if ya believe this horse chit, ya need to marry me, (by the way, do ya make enough money to support both of us?)...Okay, okay.....just |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well alright! That's what I like to hear, bold and brassy Welcome back, you know one of the things that I love about Passions is there are no doors here, just Open Forums where poetry lives and people welcome and read and reply and just care. What more could we ask for? Kathleen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
To all my friends, thanks for the positive response. Wil, you got it. I'm so glad you understood. Toerag, does the word toyboy mean anything to you? Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Keith~ i'm VERY glad you didn't leave. seems you and i share a lot in common awesome piece of work. i am gonna look forward to reading more from you. take care m'friend. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Aimster, Glad you're still here to encourage me. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kethry Sorrow reigns only at times Happiness reigns when we read your verses This one struck a spike of truth Liz |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully written Kethrey ... beautiful flow within these lines, nice to see you back! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Kethry, Such a pleasure to see you here.... great work... regards, sudhir |
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