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Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2000-10-12 02:36 PM

I want to live forever with you
And watch your hair turn to white
To share in everything you do
Till that never-ending night

Each wrinkle that appears on my face
Will be but a mark for our love
And another long line to trace
Back to the almighty above

With the aches and pain that come with old age
We’ll take comfort in each other’s presence
Saying farewell to the years like turning a page
Our happiness will be of the essence

Thankfully I can say that you are my soul mate
Looking at all that we have endured
In your eyes I can see the key to heaven’s gate
And know that my troubles are cured

For ours is a once in a lifetime romance
That most can only dream of living
All because each of us took a chance
And with our emotions we were giving

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

1 posted 2000-10-12 03:14 PM

Beautiful, lovely poem! It sounds like my husband and me, and is so well worded! Thank you for sharing!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2000-10-13 08:59 AM

This is beautiful!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2000-10-23 06:00 AM

Rodney-
   what a beautiful and loving write.
   you have spoken your heart well.

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Rainydays
Member

since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

4 posted 2000-10-23 09:58 AM

Oh my, the sincerity of your loving words gave me a shiver. What a treasure, this pretty poem, and no doubt, its author. Thank you!

Rainydays

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-10-23 09:45 PM

Rodney~
What a lovely write of your heart.

'Saying farewell to the years like turning a page'

Appreciated the linking of the years to
pages in the book of life.
Well done.
~*Marge*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 10-23-2000).]

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