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A Not So Happy Ending (Please Read)
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A Not So Happy Ending (Please Read) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I thought we'd be forever, I guess that you did too. I knew who I wanted ever more, and that person was you. I hope you know I still love you, but I can't be with you right now. Not if you can't accept who I am, I hoped you could somehow. I thought this was my happy ending, the part that was supposed to be good. I thought I was sure you loved me, I guess I thought you should. But this is my not so happy ending, to the not so good life of mine. While I sit and read about princes, who all sit around and dine. I guess this isn't the end, the tale's just begun. I think that we'll be together, because it was never less than fun. I just want a happy ending, to this not so happy life. And to live with you forever, escaping heartache and strife. ******************************************************************************************************** for Justin, as always. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Allysa~ I'm so sorry you are hurting.....things work out,just when you think they can't/won't they will, they do.((HUGS)) for you sweetie.  -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Allysa, not everyone can accept us for what we are, poets are a different breed. Even though it hurts us, it's their loss. My other half wanted to know if I was cheating on him because I had written love poems to "someone else". They just don't understand! Hugs, Dee |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bless your heart, this is so special, and take care. We are here for you. Kathleen |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
SEA: im not sure if they will work out. Dee: my other half thinks he's to busy to have an other half. He thinks his life is too complicated. Well, my friend Jesica was murdered, my best friend Marie switched schools, my friend Zach might get kicked out of my school, and my friend Linds is dealing with floozies. I miss J so much. And everyone else depends on me to help. So he can take his life and shove it for all I care right now. It's been a long day and I have a really bad headache. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Though this is filled with tears and pain you wrote with grace and talent of a winged poet...you should be very proud of this~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am so sorry for you, hope that you find the strength to get back on your feet, I hope that things would work out well, cause your love is still there, you describe your feelings so clear. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Allysa, take time for yourself, that seems to be what you need. Write, read, whatever YOU need. Friends sometimes have understand they just have to wait. Take care of yourself. Dee |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
You've written this so well, it shows your pain but I things will get better in time. It might take a long time but one day you'll wake up stronger and happier. Until then take care Marsha |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Allysa this is so sad yet full of such grace and beauty. my heart goes out to you for all the pain you have had to endure. my wish for you is that jay and you get back together...and he realizes what a wonderful person you are. may future days be sunny and bright. i'll be thinking of you and will say a little prayer. take care hon. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks for your concern!!! You all are great!!! Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Allysa, *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* and a comforting Pooh ditty whenever I gets sad as I sometimes do I hugs upon my Pooh bear who always loves me true he never seems to grumble,he always has the time and best of all he's always, totally completely, mine. Sorry if it's in poor taste Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Allysa, you've expressed your pain very well in this piece and I hope that things work in the future for you. Wondeful poem!! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing....I hope happiness comes your way...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sorry to say how well I understand this pain. Take care, and I hope things turn around for you. Catalinamoon |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
A beautiful poem, and so sad - as my favorite poet wrote, "love is so short, forgetting is so long". I think everyone can identify with how you feel. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It takes a great deal of strength to admit what you have here. More *hugs* to you, and I wish you the very best in life, because that's what we all deserve! Wonderfully written poem!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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