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CitiZen-One
Member

since 2000-09-22

Posts 84
New Mexico

0 posted 2000-10-11 03:05 PM

My Nordic Angel

In the Dark Blue sky,
above the misty clouds,
where the pale moon pours out its quiet light,
you embrace me with such depth.

In your celestial symphony you sing to me,
Take mee, take mee ever higher.. higher.

In sweet whispers upon my ear,
my soul soars with fire,
with you I want to be.

With your outstretched wings,
I hang above the world,
looking upward into your skies,
deep set, pouring out, glacial eyes.

Moon shimmering in your windy lake eyes.
So tender your embrace,
chills spill down my spine.

You Hold me above the world.
where it is warm and safe.

You whispered in my ears,
soft pink lips,
never let go.

We soared through the stratosphere,
and not a moment did we ever get old,
I stare intensily in your eyes,
I have lost my breath in the cold.

I feel an uncomfortable burning,
I must let go,
you cry out no,

descending from the heavens,

falling down through the darkness

darker and darker

falling into bottomless pit,

a place where you can not save me,
a place where you can not find me,
a place where you can not go,

falling where their is no bottom.

falling from heaven into hell.
swimming, flailing in darkness, I drown in falling,
where there is no bottom.

I cry out for your name in descending desperation,
but you can not hear me.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-11 03:30 PM

C-O~ this starts out so pretty then gets kinda scary, I didn't understand it totally, but it made me feel sad for you. -SEA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-10-11 03:53 PM

Enjoyed reading this..hope you can find your way from that place...James

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2000-10-11 05:09 PM

Beautiful!

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

4 posted 2000-10-11 09:00 PM

I pray every day that you will get out of your hole. You write so beautifully..you possess such talent. Now if you would just stop writing about worshiping toilets and hating certain "roses".....haha. You know I care..and I am here...but all I can do is pray..............beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

CitiZen-One
Member

since 2000-09-22

Posts 84
New Mexico

5 posted 2000-10-13 11:08 AM

Thank you all for your kind remarks.

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