Open Poetry #10 |
The Time Has Come. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
My Gentle Maiden, the time has come To open your arms and fly to the sun To find that one with love so deep He waits for you, your heart to keep Kind and tender-hearted you are Your love outshines even the stars This is the love that you share Even though he is not with you there Gentle Maiden, I set your heart free To go where it has so longed to be To ly to the one who shines like the sun My Gentle Maiden, the time has come ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Only a true love can set free the Gentle Maiden. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Very nice, Sven! Kathleen |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
there is the warmth of the morning sun that shines upon the gentle maiden and she sings with a new song holding on with her heart. Beautiful poem Sven |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is just wonderful. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven I'm speechless. This is so beautiful and tender. I just really don't know what do say and you know that's not like me, lol. What a gift of love this is. My heart is mingled with joy and sorrow. Tender hugs my friend, Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
inot2B. . . yes, so I've been told. . .thank you my friend. . . Kathleen, thank you. . . Rosebud. . . indeed. . . can you hear it? Temptress. . . thank you my friend. . . Juls, thank you my friend. . . your words do mean a lot. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Kind and tender hearted you are your love outshines even the stars." I would say that you are very much in tune with the beauty of this woman...and your appreciation outshines even the stars...James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, This is lovely friend, you have such a way with words, they always touch my heart, so very much a treasure you are. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, thank you my friend. . . your words are always welcome. . . Cerenity, thank you so much. . . I am indeed honored to speak to your heart. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
You always write such beautiful poetry, I love it all! Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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