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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Your eye's hold the key to my heart that love's you dear Your eye's show your love for me bright and crystal clear I look into your eye's I see forever there I see a bright future true love the more I stare I could slip deep into their beauty like waves upon the shore your eye's they touch me gently touch me to the core Your eye's unlocked my heart Opened it up to flourish Your eye's give my heart hope inspiration and courage For all time I'll look to your eye's for my courage and my hope for the beauty they bestow help to make me cope Your eye's hold the key to unlock my heart for all time when I look into your eye's I know I'll be just fine Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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natelan Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 34Escondido, CA, USA |
*bows* Bravo, bravo!!! Very clean and well put together. Amazing word usage... I would like to say that I relate to this, however, because my relationship is a dreaded "Internet-based" connection, I can not honestly say I have had the privilage of seeing my soulmate's eyes. But one this is for sure... Come this December, when I meet my soon to be finace, I will revisit this beautiful poem, and read it under a new light, because I just KNOW the potential it has for those who can relate with it. I can feel it... Hope to see more soon... *bows* A man in a bubble is a man in trouble. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ Beautiful! It's definately in the eyes......this is wonderful.  -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful eyes.... ooopsss....I mean words. well done. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could slip deep into their beauty like waves upon the shore your eye's they touch me gently touch me to the core ================ ahh yes..the eyes really do say it the best.. and then we can put the lips to better use  I LOVE this poem Trac... the promise, the anticpation, wonderful expressive writing by you my friend... someone is inspiring great things in you later-look-into-his-eyes-gator jm |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
For over thirty years I've seen my reflection in my husbands eyes. I know that his love is for me only. Thank you for reminding me, that I am his one true love. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Tracie, blissful contentment within your words...nicely done. Robert Joseph |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie I really love this, beautifully written. The eyes always have the answer, and no matter what the mouth says the eyes invariably tell the truth. Marsha |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The eyes will always say what is in the heart. This was beautiful!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a fresh look at how beautiful a person's eyes really are! Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful my friend. . . I feel like you're looking at me right now. . . I really liked this one!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, Wonderful, my friend. So true that the eyes are the windows to the soul. Very nice!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Tracie-When eyes meet, it can be electric, you've captured that feeling well, nicely written. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Tracie your so right the eyes are the beauty to the soul. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
nateIan~ WOW!!! awesome reply...thanks I hope it all works out for you and make sure when you propose that you look straight into her eyes Tracie~ Sea~ it's so true, the eye's tell us everything thanks for the sweet reply Tracie~ Charisma~ Loved your reply Thanks Tracie~ Janny~ Hello sweetie appreciate such a reply from you, means alot to me...thanks Tracie~ inot2B~ My pleasure hon...glad you liked it Tracie~ RJ~ Thanks for your kind words...I appreciate it Tracie~ Marsha~ You are so right...thanks hon Tracie~ Mark~ Exactly thanks for coming by, you know I appreciate you Tracie~ Irish Rose~ You can see alot of things in a person eye's, even some things we don't want to see unfortunately...thanks for the reply Tracie~ Sven my friend what did you see I wonder...lol thanks hon Tracie~ Hello Jen Sweetie, windows to the soul alright. Hope your doing fine *HUGS* Tracie~ Thanks Gemini...appreciate your comments Tracie~ Rosebud~ Appreciate your comments and glad to see you here...thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening tracie66, I enjoyed reading your poem. The descriptions you wrote were excellent, and a joy to read. Glad that I stopped by. Bill |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bill~ Thanks for such kind words, I do so appreciate it and I'm glad you came by as well Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Tracie, Oh, you lucky girl! You've obviously found someone worth holding unto. A very, sweet sentiment and a delightful read. Good luck with this relationship! ~ Beth |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The eyes can tell you everything you need to know, and say everthing thats needs to be said. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beth~ Thanks for your reply. Yes I have ..my husband of 12 years Tracie~ EagleOne~ You are so right...thanks for your reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tracie, If only many more people could see love described as you did. The whole world would be in love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Very well written Tracie, the eyes are truely the windows of the soul... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
TRACI... OOps u did it again another sweet rhyme you share with us...Isn't it amazing how the eyes can be the mirror to the soul when looking in2 the one you love and adore... I enjoyed this gem of your's Smiles2U [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Daniel~ I agree...thanks Tracie~ Dakota~ Windows to the soul alright...thanks sweetie Tracie~ CC~ So glad you enjoyed...thanks for your lovely comments and smiles right back at ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Your eye's unlocked my heart Opened it up to flourish Your eye's give my heart hope inspiration and courage' Beautiful poem, tracie66!! Love it!! sp  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi sp Wonderful comments...thanks Tracie~ I'm glad you enjoyed Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I could slip deep into their beauty like waves upon the shore your eye's they touch me gently touch me to the core" How on earth did this sneak by me till now Tracie??? Wonderful expression here! The eyes do indeed speak volumes, and you've painted the picture perfectly here. Excellent piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, looks like the eyes have it. Excellent poem. I liked these lines when I look into your eye's I know I'll be just fine Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The eyes are the key to many things. You have opened the window to your own heart in this poem, and what I see is beauty Liz |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Tracie- I no longer post my poems here, but always love to read the posts. All the poets in here are awesome...but something about your poetry always hits me in a different light. I am truly captivated by the words that pour from your heart. And this poem holds that enchantment I find in all your poetry. -Steve In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh those eyes....This is just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I love the softness of your words Tracie..enjoyed very much.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Tracie - I really loved this - I'm an 'eyes' person too |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ Thanks hon for a most delightful reply glad you found this and enjoyed Tracie~ Hi Kethry Glad you liked this piece of mine..thanks for the reply Tracie~ Liz~ Thanks very much for your beautiful reply..appreciate it a lot Thanks Tracie~ Hello dear Steve I have missed you my friend you should e mail me if you want I am still speechless at your comments, thank you so much for telling me that and I am humbled that you feel that way about my poetry Take Care Tarcie~ Bonnie~ Wonderful to see you here thanks hon for your sweet replyTracie~ Victoria~ So pleased that you enjoyed thanksTracie~ Hello there Wil Yes you can tell alot from someones eyes and they can tell you alot as well....thanks for the reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Klondike New Member
since 2000-10-17
Posts 9 |
Tracie, I must Commend You it was a Great Poem, and You somehow stayed out of That cliche, Barely Its a hard thing to do : Write a poem about Love and Eyes and Still manage not to say something Like: 'And somehow I knew it just might, Might be True love at the first sight.' A poem About the Eyes and Not the Word Sight congradulations |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Klondike~ Hi and welcome to passions Liked your reply I'm off to find you, I hope. Somehow I think they will make me smile  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nicely written!!!!!!!!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks for your sweet replyTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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