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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-10-10 09:47 PM

Cracks on the sidewalk
Seed germinate into stalk
Green! Nature into play

Sounds of steps, horns near the bay
Paper tucked, hands in pocket
Winds, cool and crisp, wets the tired socket

Money today, pension day
Doors closing, it is evening
Cats screaming, bins smelling

Sirens, lights, a fall on the sidewalk
Head covers the stalk
Morning sun, time to walk

Green perhaps another day
Seeds are plenty
No place to sow for continuity.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-10-10 11:34 PM

Life isn't always easy but if you know when to plow the fields and when to sit on the side then it is much more bearable. Wonderful write and WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2000-10-10 11:54 PM

Well writen verse Daniel. Gives me something to think about.
Dee

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-10-11 02:04 AM

Brought to mind scriptural reference, and I did like the implications of that...I would quote it, but my memory sucks. I'll return later, should I have a brainstorm. (don't count on it...LOL..)

And I do like this, welcome to the forum, m'friend, where 'seed' falls on fertile ground...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-10-11 05:30 AM

This is real and true to life. A very good description of the things we may see or feel everyday but do not notice. I enjoyed it.

Kathleen

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2000-10-11 09:24 AM

Daniel--I like the way you notice the small things...and find lessons...welcome to Passions!

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2000-10-11 06:04 PM

I enjoyed reading this. Welcome to Passions.

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