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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-10-10 05:14 PM

'til then...

~i breathe you~
in my lungs
deeply
withholding
trying not to exhale
until forced to,
knowing
that I
will enjoy
over and over
each new breath...

~i think you~
in my mind
forming vignettes
to sustain me
when apart,
knowing
that there will never be
a repeat performance
but always
a new and challenging one
to look forward to...

~i taste you~
on my lips
sipping from you
slowly
savoring the flavor
enjoying every last drop,
sometimes
leaving just enough
to tempt my thoughts
remaining
always, with you...

~i feel you~
on my skin
leaving traces
of your touch
kisses
on my eyes
to my lips
down my neck
leaving behind
a seething trail
of desire...

~i hold you~
in my hands
in my heart
in my mind
'til light arrives
to touch me
with words
of clearing skies,
having soared with the dark
riding moonbeams
just to pass the time...

'til then...

M

*for Kathleen...this is a favorite of mine that a friend reminded me of today...

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 10-10-2000).]

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2000-10-10 05:31 PM

I especially loved these words.
"i hold you
in my hands
in my heart
in my mind
'til light arrives"
The rest was great as well!
Dee

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-10-10 05:46 PM

Moonchild~ every piece fits together beautifully....

-SEA

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-10-11 04:09 PM

Maureen,

it's great, I love it!

Kathleen

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-10-11 07:50 PM

Dee
thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this special memory of mine
~~soft hugs
Maureen

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

5 posted 2000-10-12 12:34 PM

MM,

Well, just love it. Its a favorite of mine now. Great read, you are so good.

Where do you live.

Parker

natelan
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since 2000-10-06

Posts 34
Escondido, CA, USA

6 posted 2000-10-12 01:14 PM

*bows*

Awww... This is so touching MM...
I can't wait to see more of your work, you're obviously a very skilled writer.
This piece runs together very well!

*bows*

Nathan

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-10-12 01:21 PM

SEA

thank you..I am glad you liked these thoughts of mine from my past...

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-10-12 01:23 PM

Kathleen I thought you would like this one...

thank you for asking for some poems of love...it at least let me go into my files and enjoy some of my words of a more positive quality
~~soft hugs
Maureen

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-10-12 01:26 PM

thank you Parker...I live in Southern Pennsylvania..on the Maryland border between York, PA and Balto, MD... an area of every season and not far from beaches and mountains...although from what I hear nothing compares to the west coast...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-10-12 01:29 PM

Nathan that is very sweet of you I have almost two hundred posted on here already I think...just do a search under MMoonchild and most will show up except for any in the adult category
~~smiles
Maureen...*and there are 15 year old hippies today?..or was that in your past...

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Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

11 posted 2000-10-12 01:35 PM

Maureen-
I can pay you no higher compliment than to say - I wish I'd written this - and I'd change not a syllable

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2000-10-12 08:23 PM

Good evening Maureen,
Your moonbeam is most special, as the way you write it will always be there for you. Your writing is always superb, and always enjoyable to read.

Bill

MMoonchild
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13 posted 2000-10-13 07:19 PM

Wilfred that is a very nice thing to say and from you I really appreciate it

Maureen

MMoonchild
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14 posted 2000-10-14 01:10 AM

Bill ...and you my friend can make me smile even when I don't want to

thank you,
~~soft hugs
Maureen

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