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In The Edge of Being |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Transfixed in the dynamics Creased against the paradox Of a mind lost in visions Through the cycles of confusion Deep thunder calling erratically As it lies near the stream Echoeing softly against all sight Side by side conspicuous Rocking through boundries Constant struggles to bind Instance froze in a mirror Parallel to the rising tides Thrashing through the hallows Waves of composure deepening Flashing colors across daylight Inside whispers flourishing Counting twice at awakening Willowing breathless twofold Delightfully hidden from view "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful. . . The things that bring us together. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Justbleu, Much too heavy for so pretty a face. You have an active mind. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Sven!!  Hmm...an active mind!! Thanks SY!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Rest not the mind for fear of losing the visions of the paths we walk. Superb verse in content and flow. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well written piece Justbleu, I agree with all the fine poets above me Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Well said Mark...I like the quote and Thank You as always!! Tracie Thank You too!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Wonderful flow... the ending sent all sorts of pictures flitting into my head  . |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well written, but does seem heavy. I hope you're ok?? It is great to see you back among us <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks Elizabeth!!! Whtdove Thank You and HUGS....I'm ok!!  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent, powerful words here Justbleu! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, a very interesting ride through that poem. Great! Sandra |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Alwye Thank You....I'd have to agree with that one!!! Thank You Catalinamoon...I'm glad you found your ride interesting!!! I still am not quite sure what I was writing about here or what this piece means to me!! It's a strange one even to me!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're carrying a heavy one here but it is well done delivery...very good!! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Excellent poem great lines... loved this. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
There is something about this one that keeps drawing me back. This conveys a powerful, yet unsettling feeling to me. I do hope all is well, take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hey all of you thank you soo much!! I am hanging in there through lifes highs and lows!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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