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Winds of Loss
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Winds of Loss |
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TearsFromHeaven Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 19Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Winds of Loss < !signature-->A broken heart is easily burned, For it lies on the ground as tenders. The love it needs, does it yearn, But weak for lack of defenders. The spirit tries to soar so high, That it loses orientation. Sights that are seen aren’t real, oh nigh. Lack of destination. The soul is eternal in pain of loss, For lack of what it needs. The time now comes for me to toss, With hands full of seeds. But love is gone on winds of loss, As I fall to my knees. Richard “Rickey” N. Boydstun, Jr. Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man. Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr. [This message has been edited by TearsFromHeaven (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Have ye been lurking...waiting for everybody to go to sleep before you post? Serenity does not sleep...at night. Nothing is lost, fear not m'friend... (did you not toss the seed?) Welcome to the forum, luv...much enjoyed...now...unless you can type with your toes, get up off of those knees... |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Great first post. i liked it. it spoke from the heart, both yours and mine. "sight are seen that aren't real. oh nigh. lack of destination." i feel it and i like it. keep up the good werk. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Truly a beautiful poem |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions. I look forward to reading more of your work. Great first post btw. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A lovely visual ... so much essence of life and love soaring and flying in the winds. A beautiful poem. /Kit McCallum |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! As a lover of nature, I have seen loss there, and in my own life. This was exquisite in that you mentioned seeds....and I thought of how the wind carries them. Looking forward to reading more. Kathleen [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tears~ A lovely first post. Welcome to Passion's. Look forward to more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A very passionate first post which was a very enjoyable read  ~WELCOME~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi and add my welcome to the list!! you make quite a first impression with this. very well written and thought provoking piece. perfect rhyme flow. Lots of imagery,emotion, and wisdom! great job...enjoyed the read. thanks so much for your kind reply to my work...and to Terry as well... nice to meet you  ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Rickey! This is painful yet with a touch of hope (the wind does carry those seeds!) Very well done! Please check your e-mail for a special welcome! Denise |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Rick, my Friend, I am at a loss for words. The emotion that resonates from this poem is as real as the very air around me. Every time I read it I like it a little more. It has always been one of my favorites of yours, and I am so glad that now you have joined us at Passions you decided to share it with everyone else. Keep it up. I know that everyone here is waiting for the next one as much as I am! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Good opener my friend, welcome to Passions. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! You will love it here...this is an incredible poem, I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Oh, now, What are we doing on the second page already? I think I just 'accidentally' bumped you back to the top! Well, this poem deserves a second read.....and a third....and a fourth.... ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Beautiful. I loved the lines about tossing the seeds. Terry - Thanks for bumping it. I missed it the first time. DiObear |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions. Poignant first post. Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tears, Welcome and enjoyed the read. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
WeLcOmE! Nice poem.  There is something inside me and I know it's good, but understanding is misunderstood. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is such a "feeling" piece. I, too, loved the idea of spreading the seeds to the wind...there was hope in that, but then, the winds of loss...such lovely descriptive writing. Welcome and thank you for sharing this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Oops...I did it again.....  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Oops...I don't know why I keep doing that. I guess the wind dropped a seed on my keyboard. ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
very expressive writing! Welcome to Passions |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tears, Very awesome my friend, can't wait for more of your work. WELCOME TO PASSIONS, Cerenity |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Rick, my friend, I must agree with my dear Cerenity. We are all holding our breath in anticipation.... ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
I read a special poem today that really touched my heart, i felt through its words what you can not say in my soul a fire did start. So I read this special poem again to see if what i felt was true and i must confess to you, dear friend, through your words i better know you. And once again I returned to the poem that touched my heart for to be read i know it yearns so i'll bump it again to the start! Rick, my friend, This truly is a wonderful piece. I can feel it almost as much as you can. ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
well I took this from the top, and put it back again...really nice writing, welcome to the passions family |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Those seeds that you have tossed to the wind will land and new life from there will grow. And may it be for you a beautiful Rose! Welcome to Passions. ~Sheri |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm a little late on replying...but at least I have a chance still Rick* This speaks depths from a heart that has walked in the darkness of pain, your words full of pain and heartache...and your last lines....amazingly done. Welcome to Passions...Thank you for sharing this gift you have within you and may you find the healing touch that poetry seems to have. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
I'm so sorry, but I have to read this again. It is stunning....... ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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