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Open Poetry #7

oh sweet sleep

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

0 posted 2000-05-04 02:50 PM

sleep
yes sleep
yes
I
think
that
I think
that
sleep
must be
must
be
the
bridge
between
reality... and ...memory
because
without
it
my mind
just
can't
quite
make
the
connection

sleep
sweet sleep
please...

[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-04-2000).]

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2000-05-04 05:33 PM

This has a great feeling to it. I almost read myself to sleep. LOL!

Very calming..very relaxing..I enjoyed it very much.

*yawns*

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

*~Juliet~*
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 19
Key West

2 posted 2000-05-04 05:38 PM

Oh, what a relaxing poem! I enjoyed reading it a lot...you must've written this upon falling asleep! lol.

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