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Open Poetry #7

Distance

eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-05-01 02:43 AM

Distance

   Far

   And

  Near

Hearts reaching

Souls yearning

Hands touching

Eyes seeing

tears streaming

time ticking

time stopping

soon

together forever more


[This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 05-01-2000).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-05-01 03:34 AM

Oh I do hope you're right...loved the way this dripped down the page...like restless thoughts raining...beautifully done...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-05-01 08:11 AM

Eyes~
I like the thoughts penned here.
Good to see you back in here.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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A.C.Turner
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 83
Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest

3 posted 2000-05-01 08:39 AM

I like the way it hangs on the page. Very positive ending. Peace to you. ACT.

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

4 posted 2000-05-01 08:40 AM

A lovely piece of free verse, and the way you set it out added to this too

"Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~

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